Reviews for Kingdom Hearts: For True Story
Ventrust Westwind chapter 1 . 7/26/2016
I see you use qoutation marks when spelling Sïax's name: Si"ax. If you are curious on how to create this character (ï) on an American keyboard, here's how to do it quickly:

Press the num lock key on your keyboard (it should be right above the number 7 on the right side of the keyboard). Now that you have num lock switched on: hold down the ALT key (of course, directly to the left of the space bar) and type in this following code on the number pad (it HAS to be typed in with the numbers on the right side of the keyboard): 0239. Now let go of ALT. You should get an ï now.

You can use this URL and put it into your searchbar to get a list of different codes for unusual characters (or even mathematical characters and the characters for different currencies around the world): .

I know you are most likely done with Fan Fiction when looking at your profile, but I thought it might be nice for the readers of your story (well, the ones who reads the reviews anyway) to see this little trick so they can improve their typing. It also helps a ton when doing math assignments for school. Anyway, hopes this helps in some way.
AerisSkiloretav chapter 23 . 3/19/2016
I LOVED THIS Please make a sequel?
Imagamerchic chapter 4 . 1/27/2013
Take down saix or Sai"X as u like yo say it XD? How fid xion see that when she died befor it?
ShrillKillerdog chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
This is the way I wanted Kingdom Hearts to be so you just made it better.
DarkLinkBlade chapter 23 . 7/29/2012
The perfect ending...

Was befor it returned to cannon. But hay who am I to judge. I guess I'll just have to write my own roxas x in order to understand your need to end it this way. This was truly a story to remember. And it would of tottaly made a great kh game. U should write a letter to the company that makes kh games and tell them your idea.
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 23 . 5/12/2011
Awwww! It's over? You do realize that you justicified a sad ending with a sad ending right? Lol. That was amazing! Probably the best Kingdom Hearts fanfic that I've read! Yay! I would usually say write a sequal! but I think that it ends perfectly just like the other KH endings, sad but happy! :P
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 22 . 5/12/2011
NAAAA! What? But I liked it when Zexion survived :(. Oh and another thing, Roxas' tombstone would have been blue like how it is in Kingdom hearts 2. He merged back with Sora, he didn't actually die. :( I am really wanting to know what'll happen next! :P
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 16 . 5/12/2011
HA! I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! UnversedVanitas, haha! Powned! I'm getting too excited over this aren't I? Lol
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 14 . 5/12/2011
What the heck? Isn't Aqua supposed to be in the realm of darkness even though Riku and Mickey were down there for a while and still didn't find her?
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 13 . 5/11/2011
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 11 . 5/11/2011
Okay... I'm thinking that Anti-Sora has either had a change in heart or he was never all that keen on telling the truth. And just so you know it's Isa and Saix. Sorry that was just kinda starting to bug me. :P
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 9 . 5/11/2011
What the heck is going on?
Into-The-Dark-rutu14 chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Although I do agree that Roxas doesn't understand emotions especially love, he does actually have a heart or so it's presumed. If you watch one of the last scenes from BBS or look at discussions concerning Ven's heart you'll figure it out. I would tell you, but in case you haven't played BBS I'm not going to because I don't want to ruin it for you. Anyway back to reviewing, I am thinking that so far I am liking this story and am pretty sure that I am going to love it! :P
MechaUltimaZero chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Given that Roxas and Namine (and kinda Xion) canonically have emotions, there's a part of me that wouldn't be surprised if certain other members did as well. In particular, Saix's rage and Larxene's desperation and downright terror in the face of death seem WAY too real to fake, even with the appropriate memories.

Having said that, I can also completely imagine Roxas opening a can of borderline Terminator-style whoopass on Saix (and anyone else who pisses him off), particularly after his Heroic Blue Screen of Death at Xion's demise, combined with his nigh-Unstoppable Rage when Saix insulted/insults her. All this makes for one Crowning Moment of Awesome.

I also notice that DiZ is a Complete Monster, but that fits anyway.
MechaUltimaZero chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
Foolish Saix, so eager to press Roxas's Berserk Button.

By the way, the correct way to type his diaracritic marks in his name is, instead of just typing i, you need to (on Microsoft Word) first press alt shift ctrl : at the same time, and then type your i.

Just saying. Otherwise, another good chapter.
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