Reviews for Protector? Me?
Confused chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
Wait why did he say go to hell when she asked if he would ever join them that answer is pretty obvious...beside that excellent fantastic story!
Ilovenuttella chapter 14 . 6/8/2010
I came across this story yesterday and i absoulutly love it! It is one of the best fanfictions ever! I hope you write another chapter soon! thanks so much for sharing your story and have a nice day
flyingby chapter 14 . 5/31/2010
aw, i wanted luna. :(

wait, where's ron? i sort of expected him.

but anyway, good chapter! kind of surprising in its twists.

anyway, sorry for this review. i'm on mobile web, and its hard typing without a proper keyboard. i'll write you a better review next time. :)

best part of this chapter had to be when draco was like why did harry copy my hair?

utterly funny
keekers15 chapter 14 . 5/27/2010
Absolutely amazing story!:D I haven't read fanfiction for a while, but this has deffinately reminded me why I used to spend so much time with it lol. I really hope you'll continue writing this story, I'll be watching for updates for sure:)
Tango Dancer chapter 14 . 5/23/2010
Best time travel story ever, really! Harry's traumatism, his relationship with the Marauders and Lily, his hair being blonde... Everything is awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter, really, please, update soon, can't wait for more!
missingmara chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
i really liked this,

please update soon

: )
Sits'n'Cries chapter 13 . 5/12/2010
Harsh George actually fits how some people react to losing someone, my mom got very angry and cold after a loss.
Prongsie101 chapter 14 . 5/9/2010
I'm loving this story (: Please update soon!
Loolala chapter 14 . 5/6/2010
I really like this story, even with mistakes it's still very good. Don't drop it! Though I think persoanlly it might've done better to make Draco more like George's character, harsh and calcualating and George more like Hermione here, since he lost his brother it might've made him more aware of familial bonds and more sensitive rather than angry and devil-may-care.
Goddess of Books-11 chapter 14 . 4/17/2010
I loved it! Update soon
bananacupcakes chapter 14 . 4/17/2010
Please continue :]
Zarajulem chapter 14 . 4/15/2010
Love this story a lot. I'm sorry I can't review much right now; usually I leave long and detailed reviews - with many squees in between - but it's late right now and my mum just threatened to bar me from chocolate for two weeks if I don't turn the computer off this second.

Right, so back on track. I like your twists & humor in this. It keeps the story very distinct from the rest of the timetravel!fics. Which is a totally awesome thing. (:

Not a HarryGinny fan, FORGIVE ME, so I am totally biased, but since that is totally unfai & cruel of me, I'll just accept it for your story. Besides, once again it's totally smart of you not to bring Ginny to the past. It's too cliche, and can really destroy the.. well, everything really. Especially the uncany resemblance with Lily and how Potter men always go for redheads and etc etc yada yada yada.

I was a bit confused at the tapestry part in this chapter; Parseltongue is a language - the speaker is a Parselmouth.

.. right? or was that fanfiction? you might wanna google it. T_T

Hee hee, I really wished it was Sirius that was the hooded figure from the future.

Oh, and George is perfectly canon in my opinion. You WOULD be devastated if you lost your twin in the war. :D

.. wow, so much for a 'not long and detailed' review. Oh gosh, my mum is going to kill me.

Well, goodnight! Looking forward to more updates from the future. :D
hypercell chapter 14 . 4/7/2010
I like this story a lot! I can see you improve in your writing, which is great! This is a really good story, and I want to know what "it" is, because I don't think they are playing tag! I like how you wrote George, I think he would act like that right after Fred. Also, what is up with Draco?
hypercell chapter 6 . 4/6/2010
He saw Cedric die to. I guess that isn't as dramatic though.
Lost In The Lies chapter 14 . 4/1/2010
OMG, I've always had trouble reading time traveling fics for Harry Potter because of the way it would totally mess up the story, but this works perfectly! More more more!

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