Reviews for Protector? Me?
Rhady chapter 2 . 11/3/2009
Technically spoken Harry is only 20 years back into the past
planeteer-rach chapter 5 . 11/1/2009

This looks really interesting! The characters aren't too OOC, although James seems a bit too jealous :)

I really like the DADA class, and the way Harry felt more betrayed by Sirius than by James. I think it's silly the way in some time travel stories he spends al his time thinking about his arents, and ignoring Sirius.

Anyway, hope you update again soon,

Serendipity Star chapter 5 . 11/1/2009
I have a certain weakness for time travel fics, especially ones with a well thought out plot and good emotion. You have a few spelling errors, but nothing that can't be fixed.

Nostalgy should be nostalgia.

Hippogriph should be Hippogriff.

Sorry, I have a tendency to catch these mistakes. But still, good job and keep writing! Looking forward to the next update. :)
Richards chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
this story is awesome

keep pn the track, and i'm sure you'll find more people interested on it. Just keep on the track and this story will be one of the best of the category
Mika Tenoh chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
Great story. I love the 'goes back to Maurders era' fics. Can't wait for the next up date.
Cristalelle chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
hey there,

I just wanted to say that I LOVE your story! The only fact that I find weird is the date. You say that Harry and Voldemort land in 1970 and that both his parents are seventh years. However, J. states clearly in the book that James and Lily were born in 1960, meaning they should be in there seventh year in 1977, not 1970. Also, I wonder what is going to happen between both Voldemorts and Harry. And what about the Horcruxes? Harry's Voldemort risks to tell his younger counterpart the little fact that Harry knows where they are, so shoudn't Harry destroy them soon? It would be wise to do so. And if I remember correctly, Sirius told Harry in book five that James was not so arrogant anymore in his seventh year... Well,this is afterall a fanfic and so you can change some facts, but still, it is rather confusing... Anyway, I still LOVE this story. I hope I will be reading the next chapter soon,

xXx-Anna-xXx chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
OMG I love this story, keep up the great work!
ChamberDock chapter 5 . 10/26/2009
I really love this story, if your having some brain blockage my sugestions are to maybe have Voldemort come in soon... I dont know if Voldy would send Harry a threat letter or not but theres a suggestion. I'm liking the evil DADA teacher. Maybe have Harry's parseltongue secret out becuase he never was one to brag about that gift, and if your going for the mauraders think Harry is evil thing then that can add to their suspition.

Anyways I hope that helps I can wait for the next update :)

DeepCrimson76 chapter 5 . 10/26/2009
excellent story, keep writing!
ProcrastinationIsMyCrime chapter 5 . 10/25/2009
Lyne Morgan chapter 5 . 10/25/2009

I liking your fic, I really am... well, I don't think that Harry would really fight his father, Sirius and Remus, you know? He would try to get along with James. Try to imagine what YOU would do if you were in his place. I think, but it's only my opinion, that he would feel tired, because after a year like the one he had, when things seemed to be coming to an end he finds himself in a whole new situation, and see Lily, James, Sirius and Remus alive, after that scene in the forest...I would be happy for seeing them, and would try to befriend them, not argue with them! I guess he would try to set his parents up together. Talk to James, explain the situation, give him advices...

well, I hope you find your inspiration, and I hope I have helped! If u don't like my suggestions it's OK. You're a good writer, don't give up!
Blah chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
You make a lot mistakes in the details. Harry's Holy wand was broken during the duel in DH and he could only repair it afterwards with the Elder wand. If he returned to 1970 it's 28 years and not beyond 30. Furthermore asking if Potters are alive at 1970 is pretty stupid, don't you think ?
Little Writter chapter 5 . 10/25/2009
I loved it!

just awesome

sectusempra ah!

loved it
purrbaby101 chapter 5 . 10/25/2009
Since you asked so nicely, I will review. I'm usually one of those people who alert and favorite without reviewing.

So I definitely like this fic. It has potential. It is different from other time travel fics, and that's partially why I enjoy it. The other reason is that it is well written.

Oh gosh, suggestions... I would like to see the DADA professor as evil, like you said. I also think Voldemort should start appearing soon... maybe some sort of small attack or something? I do enjoy Harry's acts of loyalty towards the Marauders - defending Sirius, not hexing Lily, etc. Definitely continue on with that. And maybe it will help if you set a certain number of chapters, or a range of chapters (ex. - 15 or 15-20) for the fic.

I hope this helped. And if you would like, I could look over chapters for you. Aka, be your beta. I really like this fic, and am looking forward to more.
Ablus Severus Potter chapter 5 . 10/25/2009
this is an awesome story! i hope you continue.
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