AdventuresInTheSueniverse chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Eeeeeeeeeee! ArthurxOctavia!
Estranged Being chapter 5 . 8/21/2012
Funny little tidbit, in the original eroge Rathty is female and is Arawn's wife just like Octavia, Limwris, Rhiannon, Epona, Erimin, Morgan and Llyr. Arthur is woman-less and is a bit of a sis-con anyway. Just thought I would mention that your story is made out of bad assumptions and retarded anime producers wreaking the original source material. Not your fault I blame the irresistible lust for money that most people have, anyway cheer up life is good and all that jazz, see ya.
chronodekar chapter 5 . 8/14/2012
You were writing this for your girlfriend? Well, in a way I can admire your resolve. A pity that it seems you broke up. I hope you patch up !

As for the story, everyone is now so OOC that I just don't think I can take any more of it.

chronodekar chapter 4 . 8/14/2012
Ok... definitely OOC.

chronodekar chapter 3 . 8/14/2012
A bit too WAFFY for my tastes. Either that, or I was expecting something else.

User 627 chapter 4 . 7/2/2011
please finish!
User 627 chapter 5 . 7/2/2011
you gonna finish this?
noney2008 chapter 5 . 8/28/2010

you have a good story ... please update soooon
kimi-hime-chan chapter 5 . 8/14/2010
This is soooo CUTE! i swear! and i hope Hannah forgives you! and i love your quotes. .
Haruka chapter 4 . 11/21/2009
Dammit still ended up laughing man it way too funny!
solusviscus chapter 4 . 11/20/2009
This chapter really funny.

Update soon
Mask Rider Roy chapter 4 . 11/19/2009
Naughty and hilarious.

Quite long and most of the characters are there.

Good job.
solusviscus chapter 3 . 11/16/2009
Love this chappter

Update soon
Mask Rider Roy chapter 3 . 11/15/2009
Yup...long enough...and satisfying. Nice touch in adding ogam and the rest, though Arthur seem unsure of himself.

Update soon and hope their "relationship" progresses...
Haruka chapter 2 . 11/7/2009
I dont know why but I started laughing at the end of the chapter Update sooner please!
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