|Reviews for Shattered Moon Part 5: Pride with a Vengeance|
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 15 . 8/17
Awww! Yet another lovely ending to a Shattered Moon installment! Beautiful!
Yoruichi is awesome :)
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 14 . 8/17
We're all mad here!
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 13 . 8/17
Is Bya in Inuzuri?
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 12 . 8/17
Mind-control is a bitch!
So is Ren really ok? One moment he was memoryless and the next he's fine?
I hope he's really ok
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 11 . 8/17
So Ren is back, mind intact?
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 10 . 8/17
You got me in tears here! Yeah there's awful stuff happening but it's giving Bya a chance to really connect with Ren's 'little bro'
And Ren is the one following! Bya wasn't dreaming!
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 9 . 8/17
Omg is Ren the one following?
Thank heavens for Kisuke! Sharp as a fang, that one.
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 8 . 8/17
C'mon Kisuke! You're smart- see what's happening here!
I don't want Bya to hurt but if he can't remember then Hoshi will win!
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 7 . 8/17
Okaaaay comfort is one thing but how tf you gonna say that soon he won't remember him?!
Wtf is going on here?
Dude I cried when Bya and Riki made their 'vow' like that was a bfd moment
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 6 . 8/17
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 5 . 8/17
I'm watching Hoshi. And is it just me, or have there been no attacks since they arrived?
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 4 . 8/17
Hmmm just how dangerous is Hoshi? She seemed unusually interested in Ren...
I got a bad feeling, like she might try to seduce Ren away to hurt Bya or maybe stage an attack to say Ren assaulted her?
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 3 . 8/17
Omg I'm proud of Rukia for standing up but timing sux!
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 2 . 8/17
So much crazy!
This bad guy is good; he strikes fast and hard without leaving evidence. Or 'they' cause there was a second assailant at Ren's attack.
*suspicious frown* and just who is this messenger that turned in Riki? For the second to actually come get him from the 4th?
I'm definitely suspecting an inside job. Like his clan or perhaps another noble. They know Bya way too well to be some random pos - they know who to go after, when and how. Like the note Riki saw right before the explosion. Bad guy KNEW Bya would send someone there.
| SesshomaruFreak chapter 1 . 8/17
Ooohhh we got ourselves a bad guy!
Strong, smart, scary.
Your first chapter is always so grabbing!
How would bad guy know about the heir? Inside job?