Reviews for Restraint
Scifisam chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Of all the consistent Elphie authors I read, you definitely make the strongest case. This story was great. From Sophie's manipulations to Parker's endearing innocence to Eliot's vulnerability. Very beautifully done.
Kater85 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Uh-May-Zing! More please! can't wait to see the Eliot/Sophie baby :)
pdljmpr6 chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
OMG, I don't even know how to describe how much i loved this. I'm usually a Eliot/Parker shipper but thsi might have just pulled me to the other side, at least for a little while. So many small lines, strings of words that you put together to perfectly describe Eliot. His manners and thought processes and just...yeah. The 5th paragraph 'measured movements...' was perfect. Definitely describes how he fights. Loved the line that started with 'day six'. lol. Poor guy. And then the end, when he finally admits that he's kind of scared of the whole idea and not just because of their jobs. He's sort of...beautifully vulnerable in that last scene. Loved it a lot.