Reviews for Demi God or GOD
Love2read04 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
it's getting there keep writing
Furionknight chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I look forward to more :)
Nightmare Before Halloween chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I smell Gary-Stu!

*sniff*

This needs a beta to clean it up.
ItsNotSymmetrical chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Um this was okay I guess. I've seen worse but thats not the point. Anyways, just remember that you always start a new paragraph when people talk.

Example:

“Why do you keep using that word mortals what are you immortal”

“See why you are naïve, I, Kronos, can never die you fool.”

Instead of:“Why do you keep using that word mortals what are you immortal” “See why you are naïve, I, Kronos, can never die you fool.”

So yeah... Work on the grammer and it'll turn out ok.
JK10 chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Bro its iight but u def need 2 2x space and separate quotes