Reviews for Immersion
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 10 . 6/28
I READ IT THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT FUNNY EVEN
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 9 . 6/28
THAT WAS GREAT I WILL READ THE OTHER THINGS YOU MENTIONED
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 8 . 6/28
OK I WILL I READ THE STORY AND DISCOVERED JUST WHAT A LOOSE JESSICA AND LAUREN REALLY ARE
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 6/28
THANK YOU I READ IT
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 6/27
WELL LETS HOPE HIS PARENTS CANT HEAR THEM DID HE SAY WHEN BELLA IS NEAR HE CAN HEAR HIS PARENTS MINDS TOO.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 6/27
WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO IF THEY CANT BE AWAY FROM EACH OTHER WHAT THEY HAVE TWO MORE YEARS OF SCHOOL BEFORE THEY GRADUATE
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 6/27
WELL THAT WAS INTERESTING AND LIE EDWARD SAID STICKY AND MESSY WHY DIDNT BELLA NEED A SHOWER TOO. ALICE HAS ALREADY GOT THEM MARRIED
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 6/27
WELL HE TOOK THAT QUIET WELL NOW WHAT HAPPENS
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 2 . 6/27
THAT WAS CUTE NOW LETS SEE WHAT THEY HAVE TO SAY TO EACH OTHER OK
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 6/27
WHAT SHE LIKES HIS SMELL TO WELLI GUESS THATS GOOD NOW LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENS
campyrs chapter 9 . 4/18
This was a wonderful story! Thank you.
Puppy64 chapter 9 . 3/8
This was a REALLY amazing story!
LAB1 chapter 9 . 1/3
What a fun story! Loved your twists!
Eliella45 chapter 2 . 11/21/2014
This is certainly different, wonder what happens next. Good chapter.
Eliella45 chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Hmm, a very interesting and fresh approach, I like it. Good chapter.
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