Reviews for Immersion
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 7 . 6/28/2015
THANK YOU I READ IT
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 6 . 6/27/2015
WELL LETS HOPE HIS PARENTS CANT HEAR THEM DID HE SAY WHEN BELLA IS NEAR HE CAN HEAR HIS PARENTS MINDS TOO.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 5 . 6/27/2015
WHAT ARE THEY GOING TO DO IF THEY CANT BE AWAY FROM EACH OTHER WHAT THEY HAVE TWO MORE YEARS OF SCHOOL BEFORE THEY GRADUATE
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 4 . 6/27/2015
WELL THAT WAS INTERESTING AND LIE EDWARD SAID STICKY AND MESSY WHY DIDNT BELLA NEED A SHOWER TOO. ALICE HAS ALREADY GOT THEM MARRIED
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
WELL HE TOOK THAT QUIET WELL NOW WHAT HAPPENS
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
THAT WAS CUTE NOW LETS SEE WHAT THEY HAVE TO SAY TO EACH OTHER OK
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
WHAT SHE LIKES HIS SMELL TO WELLI GUESS THATS GOOD NOW LETS SEE WHAT HAPPENS
campyrs chapter 9 . 4/18/2015
This was a wonderful story! Thank you.
Puppy64 chapter 9 . 3/8/2015
This was a REALLY amazing story!
LAB1 chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
What a fun story! Loved your twists!
Eliella45 chapter 2 . 11/21/2014
This is certainly different, wonder what happens next. Good chapter.
Eliella45 chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Hmm, a very interesting and fresh approach, I like it. Good chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Hehe, IT'S YOU!
Elise chapter 9 . 4/28/2014
Awesome! I really enjoyed this story, and you write lovely lemons. :)
Elise chapter 6 . 4/28/2014
This ones a real teenage fantasy... But also a bit torturous!
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