Reviews for Immersion
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Hehe, IT'S YOU!
Elise chapter 9 . 4/28/2014
Awesome! I really enjoyed this story, and you write lovely lemons. :)
Elise chapter 6 . 4/28/2014
This ones a real teenage fantasy... But also a bit torturous!
Elise chapter 5 . 4/27/2014
That was scorching, but I'm glad you didn't end it there. ;)
Elise chapter 3 . 4/27/2014
Sheesh! I dont know about the limes you keep mentioning. This is already hot!
Elise chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
No previews, but I can click next. :)
Elise de Sallie chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Awesome beginning. Why aren't you still writing?
midnitereader chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Well this is different. Bella is the vampire and Edward is the human. Let's see where this goes.
cheysma2000 chapter 6 . 3/14/2014
Practicing limes is a good thing to do but I really do like this storyline. I hope someone writes a long length fic using something like this. :)
cheysma2000 chapter 5 . 3/14/2014
I really hope Carlisle thinks something really good for them. I am so loving this. :)
cheysma2000 chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
What a nice flip of events, I really like this a lot!
cheysma2000 chapter 3 . 3/13/2014
I do like the easy going attitude that Edward has in this. I'm like you, die hard HEA!
cheysma2000 chapter 2 . 3/11/2014
I am loving the whole scent thing and I am glad they both smell it. That way neither one think the other one is any crazier than telling someone you are a vamp.
cheysma2000 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
This is starting out really good. I want to see how they both react when they realize they are mates. :)
janelle.singleton2 chapter 9 . 11/19/2013
Great story
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