|Reviews for Immersion|
| NewEngland2912 chapter 6 . 11/8/2011
| CassandraLowery chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Hi Kathie! I'm Cassandra, and I adored your Pet Peeves list!
I'm a former writing instructor at the university level and am now teaching classes online and at our homeschool co-op, and I share just about every single Pet Peeve. The only one you're missing is that *"a lot" is always two words!* :)
And I'm a great appreciator of limes over lemons. Classy suggestion is always preferable to overly-detailed play-by-play.
I think I'm really gonna like you! :) I'm on Twitter as CassandraWrites and am writing two stories right now. I'm a published nonfiction writer, and fan fiction is a rather new venture for me.
Lovely to "meet" you! And your story has definitely intrigued me...
| CassandraLowery chapter 2 . 10/26/2011
I just finished reading "That Girl" and saw her rec for your work, so here I am! Looks like a first-rate twist on our beloved tale, and I'm definitely intrigued... :)
-Cassandra, who's also a fan of the 107yearoldvirgin :)
| CassandraLowery chapter 3 . 10/26/2011
I'm really enjoying this story-it's beautiful and wonderful and so HEA already. It's a lovely break from all the angst I've been reading (and writing).
| Mellylicious chapter 9 . 10/20/2011
Didn't reveiw while reading as I was way too sucked into the story and couldn't stop lol. But this was awesome I like the very idea of Immersion and Mating Imperative, sounds like something I could take part in lol. I also read the side shot from alice's point of veiw at halloween n left a review of how Gr8 that was, might get to read the other side shots but they will have to wait til the morning :):):)
| twirob chapter 10 . 10/11/2011
awesome story and extras thanks for the share :D
| Edward'sDJ chapter 6 . 10/11/2011
I hope we get to see how they cope at school.
| Edward'sDJ chapter 4 . 10/10/2011
This is great chance to let Edward get older before being changed; looking 17 has to be a great disadvantage to a man.
| marzywild chapter 5 . 10/9/2011
Very interesting twist on everything! Loving it!
| Saritadreaming chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
Really loving this, Kathie! The lime was tasteful without being smutty. Nice job. I have trouble switching gears sometimes between smutty and sensual-since I have stories that contain both. ROFL.
| Saritadreaming chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Decided to check out this story now. It sounds fascinating! Like the switchup and that the scent is what draws them. Can't wait to see where this is going!
| feja chapter 6 . 9/4/2011
| feja chapter 5 . 9/4/2011
| feja chapter 4 . 9/3/2011
| feja chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
Yes I'm having a great time reading this!