|Reviews for Silence|
| SoundofImagination chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
WHOA seriously that almost made me cry
when i saw the words stopping i was like oh my cheese vivi NO
stories really ever make me weepy so Well Done
Vivi My favorite FFXI Character!
| Niwaki chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
wow... I'm speechless... thank you very much I love this
| Salvia492 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
What a beautiful story you have here! Vivi's passing has never been told in such a dignified and peaceful manner. I nearly cried.
May I have the honor of adding your story to my C2?
| Myshu chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Aww man, break my heart first thing in the mornin', will ya? ;P
(Hah, I noticed that you labeled this AU. You don't consider this outcome canon?)
I always like to see an old fic concept executed differently, and this is certainly unique. The "song" of the forest set up a nice, peaceful nighttime ambiance really well, and made the contrasting "silence" all the more disquieting.
As I read his reactions to everything, I could really feel how everything was breaking down. Once he noticed his hand shaking, that sense of dread kicked in, and I KNEW what was coming. And the way he plods on, somewhat oblivious but then not really, was really in-character.
I think this is one of your best one-shots, really. It's simple, yet expertly done, with just the right build-up and details. Good stuff!