Reviews for She Speaks Fear and Truth
sassy41 chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
So sad. Hayley is so cute. My heart breaks for her. Poor thing to have her so called mom take her.

I hope edwards tries to deal with her death. He needs to heal

I so love your stories
coryoplayer chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Erica

Thanks for the update! Great chapter!

More when it's ready please!

Cory
trimee chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
...WOW!...
outtayourface chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
This is a really beautiful story. I love hayley already.

And it seems like Edward is getting comfortable with Bella. I can't wait to see where you take this.

Btw I love that the story is so different from what you usually write nits sweet, haunting, and really just beautiful.

Keep up the amazing work. I always enjoy reading your stories!
alys09 chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
great chapter. love that edward can still feel his daughter some.
HoosierNina chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Hey, I was so excited to see another chapter! The Aurora and state park reference made me smile. I was really curious why he could hear Hayley now and never before and why she was physically looking different. Because Edward was happier? Thank you for writing this - it has far exceeded my expectations.
Frenzy In Delirium chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Great chapter :) I'm glad you added a little humor into this :)
billy41 chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
wow i cant wait for the next chapter please hurry xx
DICATAKADD chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Great!

Not to suprised it's GREAT...we ALWAYS get GREAT stories from you! But never the less, GREAT!

Loved the end...that made me smile.

P.S. we need to find a place to nominate this story for an award. Seriously.
mummyanimal chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Aww, for such a sad moment it was beautiful. I think this was Hayleys intention its all about making daddy happy before she crosses over (well and finding her murderer). I love the panties comment its fab and so child like to embarress adults. Im just soo hooked on this story :D
SnarkyDee chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
That was so sad up until the end where I laughed my ass off! Cant wait for the next chapter!
mommymac0508 chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
Hahaha the end was funny oh I can't wait to find out what really happend to her update soon
piratepony chapter 3 . 10/24/2009
aw How cute! I loved this chapter...especially the ending
nicole1962 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
i think shes mother is guilty
TypicalTwilightMom chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
I would have been just as heart broken as Edward. Great chapter. :)
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