Reviews for She Speaks Fear and Truth
A-SuperStar13 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Great job, I love that Bella and Haley are understanding each other. I am so glad that we are finding out the whole story on Haley from what Bella is being shown and Edward's recolection. Great job, I really love the way that this is turning out.
Twilights1Fan chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Awe that was so sweet of Hayley to want her daddy to be happy. She sounds like she was such a sweet little girl. I really liked how Edward was able to let himself go be just give into his emotions in front of Bella without holding them in. That showed that he trusted her and what she had to say. She was his link to his daughter. He was holding her hand and hugging her. I just loved that. He needed to be held like a child would be held if they were upset. I was so happy to see that he was able to hear Hayley speak, even if it was about something as inappropriate as What was on Bella's underwear. LOL

I can't wait to see what happens next for Edward, Bella and Hayley. Please post again real soon. Thanks Erica I loved this chapter (Hayley looked happier),

Reese69 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
This is turning out to be a great little story.I love the panties...
edmom chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
good to see her happy
dylansmommy06 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
3 chapters and I ALREADY LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! It's sad knowing that hayley just wants her daddy to be happy and find peace :( i cried dang it ! ready for more
latuacantante4him chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Enjoyed it. I wonder why he could hear he now? Dying to know what happened to her.
chartwilightmom chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Very interesting.
latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 10/23/2009
*sob* Oh, no. Someone killed her or she drowned and they don't know where? Sad. Enjoyed it.
onelove13 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
Different from what I've been reading but so good! Can't wait for the next chapter.
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Gave me goosebumps. :) Enjoyed it.
gossip-bangkok chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
thanks! :)

love it...

I feel so sorry for Edward..

Hayley is soo adorable.. even for a ghost lol! :)

Awesome job

looking forward to more..

I wonder if Hayley's mother really kidnapped Hayley..
grrrr.edward chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
lovely chapter. as always.

excited to see where it is headed.
2loveybunnies chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
I love the way that Hayley wants to help her father and is using Bella to do it. She is bringing them together in more ways than one. I really do like this story and I love the way you write. I brace myself for what may come. I'm sure there are many details about Hayley's death that will be hard to hear, but I am now intrigued enough to wade through it. Please update soon!
NatesMomma chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
That was such a sweet chapter. I loved how he felt comfortable enough with Bella to rest his head on her stomach and put his arms around her waist. A beautiful scene.
EdwardLovesBella02 chapter 3 . 10/23/2009
haha the ghost on the panties thing at the end of the chapter was such comic relief to such a sad chapter. and o man the angst you can create with the kathrine chapter! O boy! that is so exiciting and I cant wait till Bella meets Edward's Parents. and I really cant wait for the problems his ex might cause, even though I want everything to go okay for Edward, the problems his ex can bring makes for such action and interesting chapters! Looking forward to it!
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