|Reviews for Somebody Save Me|
| madcloisfan chapter 18 . 2/12/2013
Loved it. Where's the sequal?
| SaphirWereTigrss chapter 18 . 8/2/2010
(this may say it's for the last chapter which is the authors note but it's for the whole story!)
(excuse my overenthusiastic use of exclamation marks and capital letters)
The storyline was AWESOME! but a bit nore detail would have been nice (just nitpicking)
The characters were AWESOML(E?)Y! written!
all over all it was BRILLIANT!
| Fist Finder chapter 19 . 3/11/2010
The story was ok most of the
time it is just that I don't
approve of some of the things
that happened in it. I know you
will tell me that if I don't like
it I should just go read some
other fanfiction and maybe you
are right. Call me old fashioned
or a - but I believe that as
a so called fan my views should
also be heard
1. Oliver and Chloe Pairing
I don't know what time you are
living in but pick up the latest
comics and you are going to find
that it is Oliver and the
Black Canary. Please try to fix
this problem in your future stories
or I will have to look forward to
some other fanfiction authors.
2. Clark Killing of Zod.
this doesn't match Clarks actions
anywhere that I know of. He would
most probably have sent Zod packing
of to the Phantom Zone or something.
You could always have made it so
and as a sequel you could have made
that the Zod Phantom and this cloned
Zod meet up sort of. Zod gets his
body back and is sort of updated
and then he tries to escape from
the Zone and come back for revenge.
Oops I think I just revealed my
idea for my fanfiction should have
been more careful.
there are some more things that I
didn't like in this story but I
feel that if I were to tell them
to you you would get frightened of
and then people would start haunting
me for doing that.
I did feel that it would have been
better if clark told lois about
where he was from instead of chloe.
thankfully i didn't find any grammar
mistakes in this story so apart from
the things that I didn't like i have
to say the story wasn't so bad.
do get in touch with me if you have
to add anything to my comment and
even if you don't.
one final advice Please don't mess
about with history that has been in
place since even you or i were even
| EileenOT chapter 19 . 3/9/2010
| whatweareafreaidof chapter 19 . 3/9/2010
Good story. I like more clark and chloe part they are best friends
| Kairan1979 chapter 17 . 3/9/2010
I think the story is complete. It doesn't need a sequel.
| Corrin chapter 12 . 3/9/2010
Ah origin chapters, how I love you.
| jazzy lane chapter 18 . 11/7/2009
great story! and il be reading the sequel for sure!
| fan1o1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
great beggining... i hope you keep writing it
| sweet psychologist chapter 18 . 10/29/2009
Please, please, PLEASE write a sequel!
| Chas chapter 18 . 10/28/2009
I love your story! Please write a sequel!
| jade2nightwing chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
ples make another one. great story
| NonOmnisMoriar chapter 17 . 10/28/2009
Let my review be the fifth tat asks you to please write a sequel!
It's a fun story that deserves another chapter.
| Maiqu20 chapter 17 . 10/26/2009
| cazzam chapter 17 . 10/25/2009
Loved this story and hope you do write a sequel - so much more you could explore.