Reviews for Somebody Save Me
madcloisfan chapter 18 . 2/12/2013
Loved it. Where's the sequal?
SaphirWereTigrss chapter 18 . 8/2/2010
(this may say it's for the last chapter which is the authors note but it's for the whole story!)

(excuse my overenthusiastic use of exclamation marks and capital letters)


The storyline was AWESOME! but a bit nore detail would have been nice (just nitpicking)

The characters were AWESOML(E?)Y! written!

all over all it was BRILLIANT!
Fist Finder chapter 19 . 3/11/2010
The story was ok most of the

time it is just that I don't

approve of some of the things

that happened in it. I know you

will tell me that if I don't like

it I should just go read some

other fanfiction and maybe you

are right. Call me old fashioned

or a - but I believe that as

a so called fan my views should

also be heard

1. Oliver and Chloe Pairing

I don't know what time you are

living in but pick up the latest

comics and you are going to find

that it is Oliver and the

Black Canary. Please try to fix

this problem in your future stories

or I will have to look forward to

some other fanfiction authors.

2. Clark Killing of Zod.

this doesn't match Clarks actions

anywhere that I know of. He would

most probably have sent Zod packing

of to the Phantom Zone or something.

You could always have made it so

and as a sequel you could have made

that the Zod Phantom and this cloned

Zod meet up sort of. Zod gets his

body back and is sort of updated

and then he tries to escape from

the Zone and come back for revenge.

Oops I think I just revealed my

idea for my fanfiction should have

been more careful.

there are some more things that I

didn't like in this story but I

feel that if I were to tell them

to you you would get frightened of

and then people would start haunting

me for doing that.

I did feel that it would have been

better if clark told lois about

where he was from instead of chloe.

thankfully i didn't find any grammar

mistakes in this story so apart from

the things that I didn't like i have

to say the story wasn't so bad.

do get in touch with me if you have

to add anything to my comment and

even if you don't.

one final advice Please don't mess

about with history that has been in

place since even you or i were even

EileenOT chapter 19 . 3/9/2010
great story!
whatweareafreaidof chapter 19 . 3/9/2010
Good story. I like more clark and chloe part they are best friends
Kairan1979 chapter 17 . 3/9/2010
I think the story is complete. It doesn't need a sequel.
Corrin chapter 12 . 3/9/2010
Ah origin chapters, how I love you.
jazzy lane chapter 18 . 11/7/2009
great story! and il be reading the sequel for sure!
fan1o1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
great beggining... i hope you keep writing it
sweet psychologist chapter 18 . 10/29/2009
Please, please, PLEASE write a sequel!
Chas chapter 18 . 10/28/2009
I love your story! Please write a sequel!
jade2nightwing chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
ples make another one. great story
NonOmnisMoriar chapter 17 . 10/28/2009
Let my review be the fifth tat asks you to please write a sequel!

It's a fun story that deserves another chapter.

Great writing.
AllisonSwan chapter 17 . 10/26/2009
loved it
cazzam chapter 17 . 10/25/2009
Loved this story and hope you do write a sequel - so much more you could explore.
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