|Reviews for Lock and Hale|
| Bootsrcool chapter 4 . 2/9
I felt i needed this filler, so dont worry about it.
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/20
I see what you did there, very clever. Romulus and Remus, the two boys abandoned to dry but saved by the she-wolf who then raised them. I applaud you and your brain.
| tamashiyuki chapter 12 . 1/4
Very good! !
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/3/2013
it is a good idea to rewrite this fic... Its an interesting concept and the jumping around is increasing the suspense but without the appropriate foreshadowing it's too abrupt and very hard to follow... I usually can piece together things quiet easily but this seems so random that I nearly gave up after the first two chapters... best of luck with the rewrite and hope it turns out very well... :D
| GurlNextDoor447 chapter 12 . 4/25/2013
Are you going to be writing anymore chapters?
| Of Stories Told chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Kinda confused by the beginning of the chapter, hopefully it'll make more sense as i read on, good story so far :)
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 7 . 2/4/2013
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
YOU STOLE THE CHAPTER TITLES FROM TAYLOR SWIFT'S SONG 'CHANGE', DIDN'T YOU?
| Oogies4u chapter 12 . 1/16/2013
You planning on finishing this one or not .. would love to see more of it :)
| MzMilo chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
| SuN chapter 4 . 12/17/2012
Its already chapter 4 and I seriously understand nothing... everything is so confusing!
| semexx chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
urghs, bella- i had hoped she wouldn't be around
| semexx chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
what does he mean he has no luggage ? what happened to his firebolt? Noooooooo!
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/17/2012
Nooooooo...why end here, it was getting good too.
Well with what you have done...good work.
I hope to see more of your story's one day.
The Crimson Mage.
| KW2009 chapter 4 . 8/12/2012
This is the most confusing story I've ever attempted to read, I think...