Reviews for Embellishment Embarrassment
darklover chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Nice fic.
She Who Wears The Tainted Halo chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
the dude needs help
A Midsummer Night's Dream chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
"nee-san!" cute...XD
MarginalMary chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
It's very funny (in a snort out loud kind of way)

Momo is genuine-guileless and unpretentious. Cute, but woefully out of balance with Toushirou's feelings. I thought she would know better by now. Unless, this happened in the distant past, in which case, it doesn't matter.

Some purple patches and a lot of grammar/syntax errors.

Toshirou's head is stuffed with fluff.

I especially liked the regression to "Nee-san" because that is a very real inclination. Under stress, we revert to the familiar which, like drunkenness, reveals our true sentiments. That Toshirou calls her Nee-san here indicates a sibling bond only. That refreshes me marvelous much because I do not like Momo/Shiro. (I will discuss later if you like because I have good reasons.)

Question: why doesn't he call her Nee-chan? San feels formal-Ms. Big Sister.
yumi chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
FUNNY!
nonexistant55557 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Once again read it a long time ago never got around to reviewing

Aw poor Toshiro and I love how Hiamori doesn't understand whats so wrong about taking baths together again so naive even for her.

thumbs up
Ability King KK chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
I really need to get the "Letter Bee" manga. Its Jump series and yet not in my collection.

Anyway, hilarious. Poor Toshiro.
MizukiMai chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
*dies from laughter*
RukiaRocks chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
*fans herself* WOO THAT WAS HOT! Goodness, where do i begin. Well, I love how you make Shiro-chan's POV all sophisticated! And umm... Obviously it was hilarious.
rolf-hitsugaya chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
poor shiro-chan!
Stargaterdii chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Hahaha, poor Hitsugaya. Hinamori's like his kryptonite.