Reviews for He dies in the end Coldsnow
Maynardoon chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
You're being too hard on yourself,.. which comes not only from my perspective but everyone who's ever really tried throughout life, to accomplish something with all that you have and not let go a single wavering bit of it.

Nobody ever brought out the best in themselves by being an asshole to themselves.

AND

Take advice where it's needed and apply it life as it comes to you.
What chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Terrible. You could have done more than a couple paragraphs. Get serious about your work.