Reviews for The Silver Flash
Firegamerftw chapter 22 . 7/18
All I can say is wow. I've read through this whole story throughout my journey home on my vacation and I am amazed at the way you have done it. Personally I think naruto is a little to OP in the beginning but you were able to balance that out with his sheer determination and will. Not to mention the Yosome part of your personality is changing the story for the better. I think you shouldn't stop the story and redo because you would lose a lot of good work. So I say KEEP GOING!

Nice job,


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Pps if you need anything from tips to a beta (maybe) shoot me a PM

BEST EVER chapter 16 . 8/17/2014
I give this an infinite eleventeen out of ten.
Charles Thomason chapter 2 . 4/28/2014
Do Not delate
I just stated I like it so far plz don't delate
Foxy-kun chapter 19 . 4/23/2014
I just finished chapter 19 and im gonna guess that yosame if i go that right ..represents destiney
Foxy-kun chapter 16 . 4/23/2014
Great story and because i havnt read the storys u got the ideas from it all seems original thou i am going to read the storys u got the ideas from after and i love how u delt with the invasion of orochi-teme and sand it was better then the cannon version and it doesn't make the hokag look week like the cannon which i hated ... The hokage has to be better then almost every one else or what is the point in being hokage ... Anyways i advise anybody to read this its great it flows well and the cliffhangers are great sen as i can just read th next page cuz its finished :D
Guest chapter 13 . 3/14/2014
Pokemon 2000
Guest chapter 22 . 3/11/2014
Evilcuttlefish chapter 20 . 7/26/2013
Hmmm. I am taking classes on Japanese, and there is a Slight grammar correction needed, um, the honorific nii-San/nee-San is used for older siblings, for younger siblings it would be otouto(for younger brother) and imouto( for younger sister) so when Anko was calling Naruto nii-San she was calling him her older brother... other than that inamorata really enjoying the story. _
najedia chapter 22 . 12/30/2011
I wouldn't rewrite it just fix the mistakes and add things to it then repost it
LadyLucifer94 chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
I am freaking loving this fanfiction, but my fault-freakness compels me to point out that Nelrim is NOT Merlin spelt backwards; it is Mirlen. Merlin backwards is Nilrem.

And on that note...Keep it up!
Bluestelue chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
I think the humor is great but you don't really put in a lot of detail in how people act, also you don't seem to add descriptions of the emotions chracters are feeling. some words/ name (Itachi not Itatchi) were misspelled. . . If you contribute a little more on these area's then this fic would be very good.
NorthSouthGorem chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
Huh, and here I thought I was being original when I named MY Kyuubi Kina.
thenick1084 chapter 22 . 6/16/2011
I just got done reading all twenty one chapters and really enjoyed the story so far. I thought alot of your idea were great to read and imagine, I really enjoyed the adding of the sage use, since you don't really see much use of it in stories and i actually am working on a new summoning contract and sage training for my story i been working on. Well keep up the great work and i hope to read more from you...YOSH!
Silver Wings of Eternal Light chapter 16 . 4/13/2011
Jreaps24 chapter 2 . 4/6/2011
liked the story so far. It's short and simple unlike a few stories I once ran into. Any story that rants several chapters about a small scene turns readers away or for me it does.
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