|Reviews for Guardians of the Seal|
| Realfanficcritic3 chapter 10 . 2/8
Mary late z mas
| Realfanficcritic3 chapter 8 . 2/8
I whant that ship as a lemon p!xxxx
| Realfanficcritic3 chapter 7 . 2/8
Ahhhh naruto don't go insane!
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/30
They are going to murder the village!
| BlueSeraphos chapter 13 . 12/19/2017
Curse you for the cliff hanger.
| DeepWound78 chapter 13 . 11/26/2017
Just finished the story and I can happily say I wasn't disappointed. While the beginning had a rough start, as I pointed out in my first review, the rest of the story more than made up for it. With an expanded universe, more powers, creatures, lore, and an interesting cast of characters with real personalities instead of one dimensional cliches, this story will probably end up a masterpiece if the quality of writing keeps up. I eagerly await the next chapter and will be checking out yer other stories, which will no doubt be just as good.
| YokaiAngel chapter 13 . 11/25/2017
| DeepWound78 chapter 2 . 11/25/2017
While yes, a council system makes some sense in the running of a village, as long as they remain nothing more than advisors, this is still set in a world with a MILITARY DICTATORSHIP, in which the Hokage is the supreme power. Which means no one other than the Hokage or the ANBU Captain, who is probably as smart as the Hokage if not as powerful can give orders to the ANBU, least of all an ADVISOR council. Combine this with the fact that Sarutobi is renowned as the Professor, for good reason, and the fact that it's the tenth of October in this chapter, which is both Naruto's Birthday and the day of the attack, he would without a doubt be with Naruto for the entire day. Especially after the first attempt on his life was made. As he would for every other year, making what you've written so far to be so ridiculous that Dr. Seuss would have trouble understanding what you were thinking while planning this. I'll keep reading, but with the way things are looking I'll probably end up disappointed another good writer ends up writing a bad story.
| Guest chapter 13 . 10/30/2017
This is such a good story why is it on hold
| Rihan Nura chapter 13 . 10/29/2017
Hope you continue! This is a really great story and I can't wait to read more!
| Elektra Ran chapter 13 . 10/22/2017
Update please. The story is really good.
| Theboss786 chapter 3 . 8/27/2017
there is also kotoamatsukami which is another ability of the mangekyo sharing it let's you basically rewrite someones memories so you can make someone into someone else make them believe that there name is sasuke not Naruto or make them believe that the are a girl even though they are a man shisui had this ability with his sharingan he was supposed to use it on every one from the uchiha clan to stop the uchiha coup and make them all not remember but dans took the eye he was supposed to use to do it so itchy had to assassinate all of the uchiha clan in one night but he loved sauce to much to kill him
| ivanganev1992 chapter 13 . 6/28/2017
Ch 13 Other Netherworld ELEMENTS DAMN MAYBE 8 TOTAL MINUS MIXES OF THE NETHERWORLD 4 PLUS THE OTHER 4
Please update. Naruto must train like HELL!
| ivanganev1992 chapter 11 . 6/28/2017
Ch 11 Naruto could would be a prodigy if he got a willing teacher . He got it . Voala.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/21/2017
lightning or an ultimate defence
naruto be trained by minato ,harashima and madara