|Reviews for With Tears|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/29
I cried. Good job.
| AiMila chapter 2 . 1/6
this is such a dark dark sad story...
he should had trusted him more!
he should had known better
now he has to suffer through time alone and cold til death takes it all away
and brings his existence to that of oblivion
| tanseynz chapter 2 . 5/23/2015
Left me speechless...so very well written, so heartbreaking. Assumptions without proof, eh?
| Sid chapter 2 . 2/21/2015
Oh fuck - this is beautiful!
I always love/hate the Jim-is-raped-but-everyone-thinks-it-was-cheating fics. They make my bawl my eyes out at the though that not only was Jim RAPED, but now he has to take the HATE that everyone else shoves on him too.
Your fic though was definitely better in the sense that at least Spock Prime was there for him and so was Bones (ive read a fic where even Bones takes Spock's side - im glad you didnt do the same).
Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2014
I re-read this story often. It is just that touching.
| anelawilliams chapter 2 . 3/17/2014
Really? Is it really over? Please tell me that it is not! I want to know what else is going to happen, please don't leave me hanging.
| drovingallday96 chapter 2 . 1/13/2014
Beautifully realistic. A sequel would be awesome, but I like how you ended it. It leaves it open to interpretation. Love it!
| babyblue3752 chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
Nononononononononoooooooooooooooooooooo! Poor Jim!
McCoy is just a big softy
| Mr. Ochinchin Head chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
And you just like fucking end it there?! That was illogical!
| not-exactly-the-truth chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
whoa, I didn't think you'd leave it at that. but nice ending anyways. poor Jim.
| sentarla chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
wow, powerful. I had hope that young spock would get another chance, but then, I know Jim would be happier and more loved with the older Spock. Well down, awesome story.
| sami1010220 chapter 2 . 4/23/2013
That...that was absolutely, ridiculously, just...I don't even have an adjective for it! great job!
| vaetta chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
IM CRYING SO MUCH RIGHT NOW
CAN'T EVEN DEAL
| Ishtar205 chapter 2 . 12/6/2012
I loved that ! Even if it was absolutely heartbreaking
| Constance Truggle chapter 2 . 11/22/2012
This was really good and reminded me of another story I read once. A lot of the same... formula, I guess? Anyway, starts as Spirk but becomes McKirk (I think?) after roughly the same thing happens with Spock not giving Jim a chance to explain. No Spock Prime, though. Jim and Bones leave the ship and eventually Jim has command of another ship, the newest, maybe? Yeah. I'm telling you this on the off chance that you know what story I'm talking about because I can't find it for the life of me.
Anyway, I loved it.