Reviews for A Little Envious
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
For a ten year old thats still pretty emprissive but I can still tell lol
Iheartonceuponatime chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
I love this story! It's really cute and sweet
sydney chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
More please? Its so good
Jennessa chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
Hiya! I loved this one, but I would like it if there were another chapter!


P.S. I'm not judging you!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Lovely story! Gal we both know we hate sakura who needs a pink head loser like her. Sasuhina rules! Love the story very cute - xx sasuhina forever xx
Yanirca chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
good but at the end that was major occness lol
Suraya Bakboord chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
JaMisa27 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
aww yea!
doodlefucker chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
aww! i hate sasuke but he's such a sweetie in this!
I-Rawr-Panda's chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Nice and intresting
stuff the world with cake chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
I liked the beginning (everything before "Hinata entered her school ..."). I like it when authors do that.

What do you call it?

And the overall story was okay, although by the end I felt that the 'envious' point had been lost or forgotten. I felt like there should have been a line near the bottom that stated or implied that she was still jealous, or not jealous anymore, or now Sakura was jealous of her - something like that. But that's probably just me or I probably missed something (which is very likely).

Anyway, I DID (really, really did) like the Sasuke parts where he was SWEET - as candy.

"I can give you popularity ... who has no friends so I can be her friend ..."

There were moments.

I think I might have been inspired myself sometime during the story but ... I don't remember what it was (maybe I wrote it down).

Well, sorry about the long review. Hope it doesn't hurt your eyes.

Or maybe the story could have ended somewhat like it was begun?

Sorry, sorry, I'll leave now! Heh.
Furtively Lethargic chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
I love this! great job! xD hope you write more!
SociallyDysfunctional chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Good story. I liked it.
smiler411 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
I totally love this so cute!
Deleting Account12321 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
aw such a cute story :) ur really good at this.