|Reviews for Slipped|
| Amilyn chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
"Good thing it wasn't his favorite because he sure as hell was never ordering it again." ...Oh, that's nice, as is his observation that she's still holding out, that she was trying to protect him from knowing the worst of it.
Oh, so nice with "I have trouble throwing away important things"...that layered statement is beautiful.
This...THIS is brilliant and gorgeous: "Stop thinking of ways you could have prevented it. Stop thinking of ways you can resurrect Saleem and kill him again. Stop thinking of all those things." And I like her discussion of how she does better the more she does uncomfortable things with safe people.
And I like that he reassures her she's not broken, although she FEELS broken...and her response that she needs to be more comfortable with snuggling. Then Tony's admission that, yes, he's always jealous. Nice. This is really nicely done.
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
That was really excellent...Tony managing to sneak in on her...the discussion of whose ninja skills were better/worse than before. I like the "More running, less beer" comment. I like her picturing Saleem on the bag as she punches and kicks it. I like the "shun Gibbs, maybe" and her statement that the very idea sounds dangerous.
The physical triggers are so well described here...and the most affecting sentence to me is about how the "fight had been beaten out of her but not the flight" ...and then the way you describe her shimmying and scooting away away away. Nice choice to have Tony recognize what has happened and give her space. Just...really excellent. I like that Tony not only asks her if she wants to talk about it but then clarifies by asking if she wants to talk to HIM about it...also a nice choice to have her unwilling to burden him. Good work.
| eva-david chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
Awww... Why did you end this here?
It's so cute :)
| Kacie 369 chapter 2 . 6/11/2010
That was really good and sweet but im not sure that it should have been rated M but that is just my personal opinion. You could have other different reasons.
| ncis29 chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
...its soooooo cute! i love your stories! great job
| LunaZola chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
Haha, I liked the end, but I loved the whole thing. Seriously, Tony is doing everything right. Amazingly awesome little story there. LOVED IT. (My therapist doesn't allow me to call myself broken. She makes it very clear that I'm not something that needs fixing. She's too serious)
| LunaZola chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Good man, Tony, good man. I've had panic attacks but have never gone through anything remotely similar to Ziva. She has PTSD, for sure, I just have anxiety. But I'm glad she's allowing him to help her... somewhat
| lurkologist chapter 2 . 3/7/2010
Oh such a shame that it ended there :(. I loved this. Please write more? Purhetty please with a cherry on top? I'd love to see them consumate their relationship.
I always imagined this is what happened to Ziva while she was away and I agree with what you've written, that she's not the same as she was before her "adventure" in Somalia.
Anyhoo, really enjoyed it.
| tiva2121 chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
aw adorable story
| Tora II chapter 2 . 2/2/2010
YES. YES. YES! There are nowhere near enough fics out there that deal with Ziva's captivity and how it must have effected her. Despite her problems with Tony, this was just perfect. This is exactly what I've been looking for ever since I first saw Truth or Consequences. Thank you for writing this!
| tonysmel chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Aw. This was sweet. Wish these two would do this on the show.
| phoenix008 chapter 2 . 12/29/2009
aww for an unbeta'd chapter, that was incredibly heartfelt. it's like tony's the missing piece of ziva, and vice versa. loved reading your stories today!
| DreamingLillies chapter 2 . 12/14/2009
Aw! so cute! Man i wish i had a tony to snuggle with haha
Loved how you stayed in cannon, you did an amazing job in my opinion!
| Elizzzybeth chapter 2 . 11/26/2009
So beautiful I can hardly stand it! I've read it several times now, and each time gets better and better.
| sarinou chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Oh please tell me it's not over yet...can we convince you to go on with the story? Pretty please?
Anyways, it was incredibly sweet and realistic. I simply loved it!