|Reviews for Kisses|
| Venus914 chapter 1 . 3/7
Oblivious Jim is so adorable!
| Shirekat chapter 1 . 2/15
Oh my God, that's perfect. You worked Spock Prime in very well, and characterized Jim so successfully. He was ignorant, not unintelligent, which is a difficult distinction to make, especially in such a short story. And I could just see all their spluttering faces at that bar...
The only thing that confused me just a little was the phrasing of the timing of the pon farr. You said it took an incident with pon farr, but it seems like Jim's already gotten the idea by that time. I think you could get rid of that clause in the sentence and it would make a little more sense.
But omg Bones... dying!
| lulu422 chapter 1 . 2/3
Hehehehe, I never get tired of this one.
| Mutant-Thyla chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
:D OMG! 3 gosh thats hilarous! 3 its amazingly adorable and FLUFFEH!
| Raiden Akutabi chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Oooooowwwwwnnnnnnn "melt into a puddle of cuteness"
| tydeerose chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
lol that was reallyyyyyy good! you should write more!
| RachelPhobia chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Spock, you sneaky bugger :P I love it :)
| Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 1 . 9/3/2013
Ivan just imagine this as a pre-Jim/Spock/Bones fic too...
| HavenCraze chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Ooh Kirk... Very oblivious lol
it's cute though
| LyckyDycky chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Ah... This fanfic never fails to make me smile and laugh. I love this. Do make a small sequel of pon furr? Pur pon? ... I forgot what it was called.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
| MissSexyRain chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
xD ROFL Poor Jim!
| whisperslinger chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Wow! This was awesome! I could totally see Spock being sneaky about the whole thing and not telling Kirk until entirely necessary. I think you had the characterization down pat and wow, the feels . Great job, definitely a new favorite!
| Traveler07 chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
All the hand nookie! ;P
| Green Glasses chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
That was waaaaaaaay too cute. Seriously, I had my fluff-face on the whole time. *squeel*