Reviews for bubblegum age
CrimsonNoble chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
You're really not very good at English. It really, really needs a fluent speaker to go over it if you insist on English, because this is pretty much unreadable.
Dartz-IRL chapter 1 . 10/12/2009

I'll be brief and brutal. Being Italian is no excuse for poor English. This is literally so bad, it makes the fic illegible. Is it all a Babelfish translation?