Reviews for Gun Play
Ladyinwaiting chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
Love this story!
assassinballerina chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Very, very impressive! I couldn't stop once I started and you nailed everyone's character so well, rounding them out, making them feel so real and deep. Your writing style is also excellent, complete with descriptions, emotions, sensations, putting you right there, in the hot, dusty streets of Four Corners. You don't need to write fanfic, you could most certainly be writing your own novels any day. Excellent work! Two thumbs way up from me!


achillies-eel chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Truly Magnificent, in more ways than one. :P

Oh the foolishness of youth. -Shakes head- I'm glad that Billy finally confessed before the guilt ate away at him completely. And I have to say that as frightening a prospect of being 'dealt with' by Josiah is, Caleb deserved everything he got from him. No riding his mare indeed. :D

Aw Ez, when will you finally learn to trust? -Sighs- So sad, luv; at least this story had a happy ending.

I wish you luck with any future writings!
Kippling Croft chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
Such a good story. I do so love a happy end.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Maybe Chris should have had a nice little talk with Caleb and caleb's father too. Gun safety was taken VERY seriously by the men who lived by the gun. This would have not been let go too easily.

Looking forward to more.
V chapter 1 . 1/27/2001
Another great one!
Michelle chapter 1 . 8/7/2000
this was very good. the story seemed very real and was well written. only part that should have changed was the end. you should have left him crippled rather than have him 'magically' regain his walking abilities at the end of the story in less than a page. the last few para.s were a bit too cliche.
Melody chapter 1 . 8/7/2000
I loved it, great almost made me cry. Once again great writing
Snoopy chapter 1 . 8/7/2000
Excellent story.