|Reviews for Fate|
| flyergrad09 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Oh wow. This was so good! I hope Tony can remember to tell Ziva about Ari.
My only suggestion is that you tag a character in your story so that the readers know who it's about primarily. I clicked on this blindly, and I'm so glad I did, but it'll show up in more searches if you list it as a Tony story.
| NCIS fanatic chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
This was amazing. Had me tearing up. You wrote Tony exceptionally well, and I loved the fact that you used both Kate and Ari. Again, amazing. : )