Reviews for Overprotective
BlankPage101 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
That was very nice! Glad Leon kicked that guys ass! That was very sweet though! Very nice story, well written! )
mookpeace chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I thought it seemed very true to character! I love LeonxAshley and it's good to see one as good as this one. Great job.
Natureboy3 chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Wow! This is great. I like how you portray Ashley in this. Nice job!
Tori chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
kya! cool fic! love ashley x leon pairning
luna228 chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
i love it!
no one chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
love the story

just need to point out one tiny detail America is a country and there is only one.(referring to line 5 of your story
USWeasilgirl chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
okay, well, the luke date was i little bit odd... maybe less curse words and maybe he should of attacked her on the third or fourth date, predators usually want to get the girl to completly trust them before they do that. it just seemed a bit fast. also, the ending was a bit fast also, especially after leon was remembering tha ashley was the presidents daughter. but the rescue and the beginning was awesome! i even love the fact that you stated that ashley's dad wont be president forever. i make that argument a lot when i got the "she's the presidents daughter and he'll get in trouble blah blah blah" i always answer with "the president only has four years in his term so leon can date her after that, also, maybe the president likes the fact his daughter is dating her body gaurd,especially after the spain incident. means leon would keep her even more safe." anyway,thats my thoughts
Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 10/13/2009