Reviews for Whispers
x.holli.x chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
That was. .

Wow, that was beautiful.

And powerful,

One of those things you read, and never forget.

Loved it.

InsanityGoneMad chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
That was really good. I loved the song! It's really not that short. I liked Asha alot. You should write TLK again, it was brilliant.

YouGottaSingAlong chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Hey hey! It did work!

I wonder if I can get it to paragraph next time
Thisworked chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Wow. I was putting off reading this as I feared it would read like that. I hate you sometimes, because the song may have been no Disney masterpiece but the writing played out in an astoundingly cinematic fashion. Your friend messing with phone internet :)
Ab55556 chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
You honestly write the most random selection of fics EVER!

I love it! *giggles*

Again, very spine-chilling.

And of course the song was going to be this good, you are amazing at poems, why not songs? We can't see the tune anyway, so you don't have the hassle of making that up :)

Don't worry, I know you put a lot of work into all your chapters, and it always shines through brilliantly, no matter

how short it is.

I definitely love the addictive ending.

As with all the chapters I adore reading, i will just come back and read it again and again an again.

Its amazing! Who knew you could write Lion King as well as...urmm...NCIS? Lol.

Love it Hay, more is expected :P

CheerChickx chapter 1 . 10/13/2009

I'm so glad you posted this!


No, seriously, I loved it )

The song was amazing.

How did you think it up?

It's great.

The whole fic was great P

I remember you telling me about the idea of writing this fic.


When we were having dinner in that restaurant?


Just thinking about it brings a smile to my face.


We were singing all TLK songs over the table.

I'm almost giggling now.

Good times.

I'm so happy you actually wrote this though.


And it really wasn't that short.

Reasonable sized when you actually read it.

Yeah, same. I hate that it always looks longer on Word.


Oh well.

Wow, that was a pretty long review for me.


Hope you liked it.

I sure loved that fic.

Awesome writing.

I'm gonnaa go now, okay..

Like I was expecting an answer?


"Don't go..!"


Okaays bye!

I love youu!


Ohh, and I'm definaitely adding this to favourites.

Just so you know..


Bye darlingg!


Tiva4evaxxx chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
That was not short Hay!


You should actually write Lion King more often, that was... amazing. So good.

The description on the long paragraphys and the sort of sad... oh it was wonderful. I love you.

And that song was really good!

You're such a good writer *grumbles*

Wonderful though, really.

I like Asha.

I liked all of it!

Actually, i lie, i loved all of it!

Aquaman52 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
You know what's weird? I can totally imagine writing a 100,0 word AU story for this movie (like, I don't know, what I'm doing right now...), but songs just baffle me. So the fact that you can write one this good and back it up with the powerful imagery to boot puts me to shame in more ways than one.

For some reason, I'm intrigued by Asha...did you just make her up on the spot? In any case, I certainly wouldn't mind seeing more about her...though I guess this is your first and only dip into Lion King fan fiction, so that probably won't happen. Oh well.

Hope I see more of you in this neck of the woods in the future.
skycloud86 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
It's good and not as short as you think, a decent size.

I've never watched TLK - or, never watched all of the film - so I have no indepth knowledge of the film, but it's a good fic.