Reviews for Erotic Death
Jon1234 chapter 3 . 9/14/2022
I love this how this story is going
lou2003us chapter 3 . 7/14/2021
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
Mend1cant Bias chapter 2 . 11/24/2020
Your Naruto is literally a fucking prick
Guest chapter 2 . 5/7/2019
Um update maybe I don't know if this story is dead
Guest chapter 2 . 5/10/2018
right on but would of love to see him show nothing but hatred to them but overall this is a really good story
Hmason chapter 3 . 3/14/2018
i like it , honestly this is YOUR fanfiction if people don't like it they can just write their own version
V01dSw0rd chapter 2 . 11/26/2017
I would have no problems being a Beta
Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2017
hope you make more and don't add moan to the harem make it three girls and he's vary cold to everybody and would kill on the spot
Guest chapter 2 . 11/7/2017
he should have fucking killed her along with everyone else that was what I would have done
V01dSw0rd chapter 3 . 2/14/2017
Please UPDATE soon!
mdhunter111 chapter 3 . 8/7/2016
Great job with this story so far. Thanks for posting, and please continue with the next chapter real soon. Looking forward to it, and have a great day. I'd really like to see Naruto have a harem consisting of all the Legendary Pokegirls, as well as other lower level Pokegirls. Again, have a great day, and please continue with this story soon!
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 2 . 5/11/2016
So this is pretty much dead then?
Silvereye-BW chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
Awesome. Can't wait for more. Will Moan ever be given a second chance? Will Naruto capture Ai, with like a Pokeball or something?
Mikaeru346 chapter 2 . 6/21/2015
Killing two bird with one stone.
Mikaeru346 chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Moan moaning in ectasy
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