Reviews for Erotic Death
StallionWolf chapter 3 . 6/6/2015
Any more chapters?
biob1 chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
The sharingan jutsu you were thinking of is kamui not sussanoo
Jyuubi no Naruto chapter 3 . 5/18/2015
Nicely Done Chapters
MickDunD chapter 3 . 4/13/2015
Fucking update! Or declare the story dead! Do one!
MWRANDOM chapter 3 . 7/18/2014
Would have liked to see more of this as it was an interesting beginning. As it is roughly five YEARS since the last update that seems unlikely. A shame that.
BeastFromTheEast chapter 3 . 11/25/2013
dude ignore those flamers and write these awesome stories as always
LOP chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
any sign of life?
Biblio388 chapter 3 . 10/10/2013
Very intriguing plot for the story. It will be interesting to see where it goes from here. Hope to read more in the future.
Biblio388 chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
Love the girls that he has got so far. Wondering if all of his possible harem will be like them or will he find normal ones for that?
XxDarkNero17xX chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I love reading this story I hope you updated soon would love to know what happens next
GhostWagon chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
i really liked this chapter. i hope you write more of this story.
EliteShadow chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
please update this story soon i and many others would love to read more of this epic story soon!

so please post more soon!
Luke Dragneel chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
Good job on your story so far, though I feel quite sad at Moan's own stupidity, after all she IS the smartest Pokegirl so this really makes you wonder where her intelligence went to.
Dude with a name chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
Compared to other pokegirls stories this one makes other boring and that is saying somthing i would love to see naruto pull a sukebe or/and madara and try to rule the world.
P.S great story hope you continue this and i aplaud your skills as a writer.
Have a Little Feith chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
Let's hope this becomes a long series. Cuz I'm liking it so far.
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