Reviews for Broken
1.1.1.1.nolongerinuse1.1.1.1 chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Beautifully done, I loved it!
GothicKitten91 chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
this was a great story that seams majorly cut short.

GothicKitten91
house3er4ev chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
lovely
Aurette chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
This was nicely done. I liked the tone.

Has no one told you that the editing marks were left in tho?
UltraAmbiguousID chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Interesting, but abrupt. I agree with another reviewer that Hermione wouldn't have been so casual after being raped. Also, I think Madam Pomfrey would have diagnosed it.

You could easily expand or continue this idea into several chapters.

Thanks for sharing!
Valmarien chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
A very moving story, though I think Hermione would have been more traumatised by such a violent attack as you describe. Thank you for not going into detail about the attack. It was not necessary to the story.
Ebony and Bronz chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Very cute. :)
Loyd1957 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Lovely, very lovely. Both characters were real to me. The plot line was real. In such a short story, you covered the emotions, hurt, anger and recovery very well. I would love to see a sequel, but understand that this stands alone.
lightning strikes 101 chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
a bit abrupt at the end but sweet.

and i seriously liked the way u wrote that. it was seriously real real. like - it wasnt "oh im fine and dandy" but the way that she was treating herself and everything was like...real -what shouldve happened.

anywayz, i totally loved this!

me
HermioneSnape82 chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
This was a lovly story about MY favorite couple. I hope you continue to write stories about them.

/Morsan82 from Sweden
IAmLesboSoDealWithIt chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
aw!
diamond-helen chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Lovely story, sad but sweet.
notwritten chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
This is pleasant, and interesting to read. Thank you for sharing it. Keep smiling. :-)
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
thanks for the story please keep writing
Varity Sinning chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
Great story. I really liked the way you wrote Snape.
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