Reviews for Just Pretend
Nightjade88 chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
Wonderful story! :)
XVBadKittyVX chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
I loved this! I think you did a great job of keeping Dante in character. I really do feel bad for the guy.

Fantastic job, I look forward to reading more of your work.
KhAeL chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Very sweet yet very sad.. a good addition, i must say
Bridgettalladega chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I normally don't read stories like these, but this one was really good! I think you kept Dante in character...and well, it was quite well-written!
Semjaza chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I really liked this; it's nice to find something different once in a while. And I know what you mean with everyone being ungrateful towards Dante in the anime. Poor guy, he seems so alienated in it. Anyway, this was great! :D
PixieArtist chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Honestly? I like the idea behind this one shot. Though, even for a one shot it is rather short. I know it is just an explicit scene to begin with, it's just for a one shot, you need to have a feel for the characters. The woman in this story is a mystery. Aside from her name, and the fact that she and Dante have a little something now and then, we really don't know anything about her.

You could start of with a kind of, flash back type thing letting us know how they met, and how this all begun.

All in all, it's a wonderful one shot, and I would be interested in a full story.


binnycanflyy chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I liked it. Stayed true to Dante's character. But it was a little short I thought. Other than that, job well done. (:
HieiHeeroJiroRikuSesshySeto chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
0.0... *stares* O...M...G... *blinks slowly* i loved this. i am now going to go check out your other stories
kbird213 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
Loved that u gave Dante a break!everyone else makes him a rapist douche bag or queer. Please continue it!