Reviews for Finally Over
Mooncombo chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Well written story. I would imagine that it is difficult to use lyrics and weave them in as dialogue, but you have done so nicely here. Kudos!
Cricket Songs chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Aww, this is short but really good. :) It's weird seeing lyrics incorporated into dialogue like that, but I think you handled it well.

Great job!

Cricket