|Reviews for Coalescence|
| jag101265 chapter 24 . 15h ago
| jag101265 chapter 17 . 23h ago
This is my favorite chapter! I could really picture Alice.
| lovepath chapter 12 . 2/16
Rereading on my Nook for like the fifth time and posting here, as I note this story still receives reviews. Cuz it's awesome. So awesome that I think I just noticed for the first time that the way Alice reacts to Jazz going to set a trap (shaking and wrapping her arms around herself) is highly comparable to how Bella reacts to Edward leaving her, tying in nicely to Alice's ability to empathize with Bella and her fury at Edward.
Yes, I'm still a Twi-fanatic.
Love and hugs to my friend in a very cold part of the world, from a freakishly warm part.
| Nicola Charalambou chapter 1 . 1/30
Love this so far too
| Jup4Lita85 chapter 1 . 1/7
| jamiewhitehead3 chapter 8 . 9/1/2013
I don't typically post reviews, but being a writer myself, you wrote this chapter beautifully! Alice and Jasper were so in character, and the descriptions of the emotions and colors flowing between them was flawless. I could see it in my head. I have to say, I have read singularity, and I thought it was incredible, but this story is simply amazing. I can not wait to read more!
| Lucretia-Caseyandra chapter 24 . 7/17/2013
An absolutely magnificent sequel to Singularity! Jasper evolved beautifully, but I love how you show that he still has room to grow! Healing from traumatic events takes time, and this is the first Jasper/Alice story to really capitalize on that. Great job again! Caseyandra
| Arrowhead1996 chapter 24 . 6/20/2013
I am SO enjoying your stories! I thought of a song that really applies to Jasper, Sound the Bugle Now from the soundtrack of Spirit: Stallion of the Cimmaron. I'm off to read the next story!
| SherlockedinStohess chapter 21 . 5/11/2013
Great exciting chapter, but there were quite a few confusing points during Jasper's last POV in this chapter, with missing pronouns or it was missing clarity about who was talking or doing something. You should go back over that.
| Crazy Female LEPrecon chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
I love your story. My sister, Shadow Huntress, told me of your stories and cajoled me into reading them. I believe that Jasper would have the upper hand in betting in card games because one of the objects of the game is to hide your emotions, something that you just can't do around Jasper.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
| XxSparklesxxBrightlyxX chapter 24 . 4/30/2013
That was a great last chapter and an engaging look at the next story that certainly I will be reading :) thank you for taking the time and effort to write this.
| XxSparklesxxBrightlyxX chapter 17 . 4/28/2013
I just had to comment on this, beautifully written and so very moving. And I loved Alice's screaming towards Edward, very funny. I should have been asleep an hour ago but I HAD to read Edwards return first, worth it :)
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/17/2013
Thank you for a lot of very good laughs
| Anearin chapter 24 . 1/27/2013
I cannot even begin to describe how much I have enjoyed reading this story, words like 'brilliant, hilarious, moving, and spectacularly seamless' do not even begin to cover it. You have truly worked a masterpiece in this story and to say that I was devastated that it had to end is an understatement. I was most most excited to see that you have continued to spinning your masterful web that is the story of Alice and Jasper in another story! I cannot wait to read Rogue, and then to come back and retread this one, and perhaps someday the prequel to this one... Though I am more interested in their stories together I must confess... Anyway I just wanted to thank you for sharing what has to be one of the greatest tellings of two of my favourite characters. Thankyou so much for giving so much time and energy to this story. I have truly loved reading it and would recommend it to anyone.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/15/2013
I truly love your story! Your writing is so good that I even love the authors note!