Reviews for The Hokage's Will |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto is a weak leader who cannot kill people who threaten the peace of Konoha. |
![]() ![]() I know this is old but reading this now in 2024 it’s hilarious I’m sorry but some shit always stays the same huh |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg this is hands down the fucking worst shit I ever fucking read on here. pure trash |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where did all these injuries come from, he didn't take much damage from Sasuke or Danzo. It feels like the author threw in some random names of injuries. This feels forced now, a totally unnecessary hospital visit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You don't have to go into the details and history of every hand seal and seal script. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a stab to my brain and my heart every time you write "frog" instead of "toad". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you have the last few chapters? I know it has been a while but I would like to see hoe this story concludes. Even if I may not like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouuuuu. Interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man Kakashi is desperate for that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually it’s kurotsuchi |
![]() ![]() Keep it up |
![]() ![]() Ok ️️️ |
![]() ![]() Hi I'm too lazy to log in but I just want to say that I'm kinda disappointed how the last few chapters went. Wasn't the Raikage the second in command but was supposed to be the figure head of the alliance? Why is Naruto punished when he did have tsunade in his place while he was gone? For a good reason too I might add. Even if she was just in charge of konoha , when the commander is absent the second in command is in charge. It honestly makes zero sense. Punishing him would just further demoralize the people anyway. I realize that you needed a way to give him more freedom to act but it was done in a weird way. I do love your stories though. Your writing style and writing in general is very good. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto was also trying a lot harder here because as Hokage he can't be as focused on just retrieval he needs to step up and do what's right and if he gets what he wants at the same time then he can happy if not he at least tried and still did his duty. |