Reviews for The Hokage's Will
my 2 guys chapter 15 . 10/8
that was good keep the chapters coming
Trala chapter 5 . 10/4
Your grammar and story telling is atrocious. It is a wonder how you got so many favorites, oh well.
Arsenal chapter 15 . 8/16
A good fanfic for me happens when I have no single complaint about the story. It means every direction the plot goes is well justified. It's why I'm disappointed that this is the last chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30
Show no mercy to Sasuke he deserves to die
Gotts chapter 15 . 3/21
Yeah you pretty fuck your own story with the last two chapter.
HiddenScar chapter 15 . 12/2/2017
Amazing story man. I really like the way you took the story. I haven't seen many authors who throw in some twists in the story like you. Really awesome work. And I know that it is about 8 years from when you stopped updating but if due to some miracle you start writing again, I'll really love it.
Chikeninacoop chapter 3 . 9/4/2017
might as well have Naruto DAB cus that was pretty cringe
Guest chapter 10 . 8/11/2017
he's taking pleasure from other people's misery...

schadenfreude
ˈʃɑːd(ə)nˌfrɔɪdə,German ˈʃɑːdənˌfrɔydə/Submit
noun
pleasure derived by someone from another person's misfortune.
"a business that thrives on Schadenfreude"
Jared51 chapter 15 . 7/16/2017
You Ruined a fucking good story
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 6 . 7/6/2017
He honestly doesn't come off as thoughtful. He comes off whinny. Its a bit irritating. Its one thing to want peace but its another thing to whine about having to do what needs to be done. He eventually does what he needs to do but why does he whine about it?
Allhailthesith chapter 5 . 6/17/2017
Sasuke doesn't have tsukiyomi
shadowspiral01 chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
justtothe scott guy, i ulhavebt rewlad this yet but if its after pains fight doesnt that mean oh i dobt kbow SHADW VLINES THAT YOU GET THE MEMORIES/MUSCLE MEMORIES FRON AND CONSIDERING HE CAN MAKE A SHIT TON! fairly certain he could become GODLIKE in 5 days
scott chapter 1 . 6/1/2017
sorry dropped before even getting to the end of the 1st chapter, Narutos justification is essentially "Danzou is evil because the guy i just killed said so" yeah right, this is supposed to be a council of elders who are wizened, old and not to mention politically savvy they should have talked Naruto into a corner in 20 seconds flat with that level of argument, after all hes not exactly smart and if u think that one line of dialogue about training for sage mode is enough to convince you audience that Naruto is now perceptive then your treating your audience like fools. Not to mention there is the contrivance of the evidence against Danzou whipped up in less than a paragraph, again more potential for drama here wasted.

Naruto did not have to become Hokage in the 1st chapter, for all of Danzous bluster about needing leadership is a self serving argument and surely the fire lord would see it that way, and could easily have suspended any such appointment for a week, and justify it by saying that he wants to give Tsunade a chance to recover and also consider all the candidates and have the head jounin organise affairs for that duration, Naruto could have used this time to gather evidence of Danzous duplicity.

And there is the chapter killer, learning an entire ninja discipline in 5 days u gotta be kidding me, now i reaise this is fannon, but its one of the most acceptable bits of fannon and that is that Fuuinjutsu is the most difficult of all ninja disciplines, not only requires incredible intelligence but also to learn everything there is to know would take multiple lifetimes.

awful 1st chapter, potential for real drama wasted in favor of contrivences and a needless sense to rushing the story in the 1st chapter no less.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/13/2017
PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Wolfone10 chapter 2 . 4/14/2017
Funjutsu being mysterious and rare? HAAHAHA that's a laugh, ever notice that Orochi, Kabuto, Danzo, Obedito, the guy that interferes with the SECOND chunnin exam (and is supposed to be "very good") and just about EVERY villain that naruto fights ALREADY KNOWS IT? Plus Tsunade, jiraya, yammato, kakkashi, sakura, chyo, shizune, tenten, (and hinata and ino to an extent), If it's a secret, it's a very BADLY KEPT ONE... "mysterious and unknown art" what a joke.
1,753 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »