Reviews for The Wedding Present
Laura Harkness chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
I love this:

I suppose he's off somewhere. Up there, saving worlds. Changing lives

it is haiku-like and i adore haiku.

i like the use of the word "discomforted". seriously. you know us plebians would probably use "uncomfortable" but there is something beautiful, poetic about "discomforted". when you say it out loud it has a certain quality, a certain sound to it.

now, i have to admit i didn't like this much the first time i read it. odd, that. i knew that i was maybe not in the best of mindful states so i set it aside and reread it this morning, with my fresh coffee and the sky just starting to turn light. i liked it much better. it wraps up so beautifully at the end. a lovely little circle.

i like lovely little circles.

in "love" i sort of tried to do that with the ending but i think a long story put out in serial form like that - no one saw it. sigh.

very nice. a wedding, a mystery, and a happy ending all in less than 10 words.

well done.

l(h)g
teddybowties chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
SO, who was the woman in pinstripes?

WAs it him? heheh.

Nice idea, the watermark! ALl of it really. So nice. YAY
ShakNali chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
That was fun!