|Reviews for Awake in the Infinite Cold|
| Pattigirl23 chapter 1 . 11/23
Wow, this was TOUGH... but beautiful! I'm crying right now... Thank you so much for sharing. You are an amazing writer.
| JaysWorld2 chapter 22 . 11/11
This was haunting and amazing. Such a wonderfully sad story, that hadd me hanging onto every word. Which is saying something, as I have a bad habit of skimming when I read (I blame a history professor who taught me it was the only way to get through enormous piles of reading material in college...).
I don't know if you still read reviews, but I still want to say thank you for writing this story. It was beautiful.
| VryUnique chapter 22 . 10/2
I understand but I’m disappointed.
Was James caught? What happened to Edward’s mother?
Did Alice expect Edward to run and leave Bella behind?
Why did Edward even leave the facility? What did he have to do?
This all happened because of Jasper. I hope he is aware of that.
He knew James was dangerous or he wouldn’t have walked Edward
home every night.
Even more than an unhappy ending I hate people not getting what’s
coming to them.
Thank you for the story, it was pretty awesome up until the last chapters.
| VryUnique chapter 21 . 10/2
Please don’t let her die.
| VryUnique chapter 19 . 10/2
Is there a difference with Edward because he had 2 doses?
Is Alice speaking the total truth? Is she able to hide what she doesn’t want
Edward to see? Last chapter it sounded like she saw James killing Bella and
her getting Edward to herself.
I was so hoping things would fall into place for Alice to end up with Jasper.
I am assuming that they can force Alice to stay because she is a ward of the
State but they can’t force Edward to stay…..?
| VryUnique chapter 18 . 10/2
I think they should have held off on consummating their relationship.
I hope Alice is just going along with some plan of hers.
Again, I can’t believe his mother abused him like that. I hope he becomes
famous and they are sorry.
I don’t think I have ever heard of a 5 year old getting an erection looking at
his sister, that was strange. He shouldn’t get hot at 5, he should just be curious.
| VryUnique chapter 17 . 10/2
| VryUnique chapter 16 . 10/2
So Alice mastered the computer and Edward mastered the piano?
Bella shouldn’t have kissed him, she just said he was previously at first grade level.
She should have waited to see what else has changed. Maybe he is still childlike but
can now be taught.
I can’t believe his family threw him away. I hope he becomes famous and they are sorry.
| VryUnique chapter 15 . 10/2
Awesome! Playing his own song would be even better. I’m hoping the rest of his brain catches up to the music. Fingers crossed.
| VryUnique chapter 14 . 10/2
Jasper is going to get him hurt or killed.
| VryUnique chapter 13 . 10/2
| VryUnique chapter 12 . 10/2
I guess Alice knows where Edward’s sessions didn’t take. I hope she helps him.
| VryUnique chapter 10 . 10/2
What an ass! He deserved to be kicked out.
I can’t believe Bella is pulling a Edward, I’m leaving you for your own good.
| VryUnique chapter 8 . 10/2
Ahhhhhh….. poor Edward.
I’m still hoping for a miracle.
| VryUnique chapter 7 . 10/2
If I didn’t believe that the study was going to work for Edward in this story I would wonder if the whole thing was fraudulent. It isn’t hard to believe that Alice was faking her condition. I have to believe it’s going to work for Edward because him and Bella wouldn’t be able to be together otherwise.