Thank you for this incredibly sad, incredibly beautiful story. I don't know what else to say!

So heartbreaking! Bella had such high hopes for Edward!

This is heart-wrenching! What now?

I should not be trying to not bawl my eyes out after midnight reading this beautiful, heartbreaking story.
It's given me all the feels. This is definitely not where I saw this story going. Good lord. It was so hard to read the last chapter.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

Wow, this was TOUGH... but beautiful! I'm crying right now... Thank you so much for sharing. You are an amazing writer.

This was haunting and amazing. Such a wonderfully sad story, that hadd me hanging onto every word. Which is saying something, as I have a bad habit of skimming when I read (I blame a history professor who taught me it was the only way to get through enormous piles of reading material in college...).

I don't know if you still read reviews, but I still want to say thank you for writing this story. It was beautiful.

I understand but I’m disappointed.
Was James caught? What happened to Edward’s mother?
Did Alice expect Edward to run and leave Bella behind?
Why did Edward even leave the facility? What did he have to do?
This all happened because of Jasper. I hope he is aware of that.
He knew James was dangerous or he wouldn’t have walked Edward
home every night.
Even more than an unhappy ending I hate people not getting what’s
coming to them.
Thank you for the story, it was pretty awesome up until the last chapters.

Please don’t let her die.

Is there a difference with Edward because he had 2 doses?
Is Alice speaking the total truth? Is she able to hide what she doesn’t want
Edward to see? Last chapter it sounded like she saw James killing Bella and
her getting Edward to herself.
I was so hoping things would fall into place for Alice to end up with Jasper.
I am assuming that they can force Alice to stay because she is a ward of the
State but they can’t force Edward to stay…..?

I think they should have held off on consummating their relationship.
I hope Alice is just going along with some plan of hers.
Again, I can’t believe his mother abused him like that. I hope he becomes
famous and they are sorry.
I don’t think I have ever heard of a 5 year old getting an erection looking at
his sister, that was strange. He shouldn’t get hot at 5, he should just be curious.

Yah!….

So Alice mastered the computer and Edward mastered the piano?
Bella shouldn’t have kissed him, she just said he was previously at first grade level.
She should have waited to see what else has changed. Maybe he is still childlike but
can now be taught.
I can’t believe his family threw him away. I hope he becomes famous and they are sorry.

Awesome! Playing his own song would be even better. I’m hoping the rest of his brain catches up to the music. Fingers crossed.

Jasper is going to get him hurt or killed.

Awesome…..