|Reviews for Expectations and Other Moving Pieces|
| stinal102 chapter 46 . 3/13
HEA is by far my favorite. It helps distract me from my everyday struggle with MS. I thought I would try this story and was drawn into it. I could not stop reading. Your writing is very powerful and can pull a reader in to feel the emotions of every character in the tiniest detail. (Even when someone doesn't want to.) You should never stop writing. Whatever your heart leads you to write.
| pinklicous77 chapter 46 . 2/24
hellooooo. I just finished your story and I really like it. the angst is good. overwhelming but good. :)
are you going to continue it anytime soon? you haven't updated in a long while.
anyways, go forth into the land of Creativity and come back when you're ready :)
| Be-U-tiful chapter 46 . 2/21
Wow this story is amazing! I have no other words for this!
| loolupe chapter 11 . 2/20
I'd forgotten how much I love this story. It's raw narrative captures me every time.
| just a fan chapter 2 . 2/18
I've never experienced a Edward like this, acting this way towards Bella. I guess I'll just have to wait to understand more
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/11
Well, at least Emmett is nice to her. Bella is trying to be nice, not complaining about Edward to her in-laws.
| Maria Luisa chapter 46 . 2/7
you will keep posting? or you will stop? i'm reading in portuguese because i'm from brazil, but it's been a long time since you update so... i'm loving the fanfic it's amazing, you are amazing! so i would like to know if you will finished... and if you give up please don't! you are to good for that! bye :) (sorry for my english it's horrible)
| Guest chapter 46 . 2/4
your last update was on November 13 2013. I truly hope you are going to complete this story. it is much too good for you to just drop it . I thank you for writing and getting it on fanfic for all us to read because we have no talent or are just too lazy to do so. again thank you so very much. I hope that real life doesn't send you too much trouble to deal with, and bright sunlight and blue skies will be with you always.
| Amar chapter 46 . 1/30
Gripping ... everyone has different perspective about love ... will they still have divorce ... I guess marriage really doesn't survive when a child dies ... but in case of Bella's parent ... Bella was not enough to glue her parents together ...
I guess it was good thing the child die early without knowing anything ... I mean Bella is not ready to be a mother at that time ... She was too dependent on Jacob or feeling too much for Jacob... When a mother is to hung up to a man who does not have honor ... It's a mess and most of the times the child gets the full force negative outcome of that messy love affair... So I guess it's good thing the child die ... It might have been a wake up call for Bella when her child die but nooo it was not enough... The child was not enough...
| Crystal Joyy chapter 1 . 1/28
Do you know the next time you'll be updating? I look forward to reading the next chapter. I love where you're going with this.
Lol. You know a FF is good when you wanna write a FF for it.
| jpreader18 chapter 46 . 1/28
Wow! I just stumbled upon this story and I am blown away. There are so many emotions present in your story and I have been able to relate to so many of them. I can't wait for the next chapter. I am excited and anxious to see what other second chances Bella is presented with.
| chatterbox33 chapter 46 . 1/25
That was so beautiful. The power of forgiveness is so amazing. You wrote that so clearly and, again, beautifully.
| HopelessPoetic chapter 46 . 1/21
I just started reading this story and I'm so so so in love with it! I literally lost sleep over it! Please tell me this isn't the end! I just couldn't bare it if this is how it ends.
| charleexx chapter 46 . 1/20
I absolutely love your story it makes me laugh cry get frustrated but I love it all :)) can't wait to read the next chapter :)))
| Yoon chapter 46 . 1/19
I have followed this fic for years now. Discovered it before I moved to New York (2010), and it always popped up on other authors' fav. pages. After rereading this, and and catching up after all this time, I have to say that I am totally addicted to this story. Great job, I love it. And at first (this was in 2009), I did not understand it - Edward and Bella's relationship, or Bella's changes either. But now I fully do. I hope you update soon! Wishing you the best. I will def. bookmark this right now.