Reviews for Expectations and Other Moving Pieces
Guest chapter 46 . 6/12
Please, finish it. S2
Nostalgicdummy chapter 1 . 5/27
After chapter after chapter of pure angst I was waiting for the sweet relief of a happy ever after... that never came. That probably won't ever come. I've tried formulating an ending in my head, but it's not the same. So much thought and feeling went into creating these characters and their story. It's unforgettable, and haunting. This author has skills and I hope that she is still writing, because she has a compelling voice, a gift... I will still hold out hope for some closure but will try to be satisfied with what I got out of this captivating story. It tortured me emotionally in the best way. I'm rambling now, but on the off chance my words are read by the author, and provide some encouragement to complete, I'm going to post this review.
HiraFrance chapter 1 . 4/28
Hello darling, I don't know if you still have the inspiration for this story, but l hope you do...
I hope you're fine too and that you didn't update for so long because life treat you well :)
So, just a few words to thank you.
Much love, maybe someday you'll find the words to complete this baby :)
Until then, take care!
Guest chapter 40 . 4/4
if he doesn't love bella then why in the hell does he spend so much time with her? Let her live in his house? Pay her bills? Buy her groceries? Why does he bother with her at all?

He straight out told her he doesnt love her anymore in chapter 40...FINIALLY. So thats it, done deal. Bella should pack her shit right now and get the fuck out of his house!
Guest chapter 36 . 4/3
Am I the only one reading this wishing that just occasionally the writing was clear?

Bella is always saying how she understands Edward now...or it all makes sense...but It fucking doesn't! Shes like "oh I get it now"...and then she doesn't tell us! its so damn annoying.

I just feel like clear and concise is easier to read, at least we would know what Edward is feeling. These characters say SO MUCH to say so little.
Guest chapter 36 . 4/3
I'm so fucking confused!

Bella said that that kiss meant more to Edward then it ever meant to her...WHere is she getting that idea from?

I thought Edward hated her and wanted that bitch gone? He gave her divorce papers!

And what did he mean "I cant believe were back here again?" Does he mean that bella is trying to use sex as a way to get him to stay? I cant think of what else it could mean besides that.
Guest chapter 35 . 4/3
I didn't really understand chapter 35. Are we saying that Edward was waiting to give bella divorce papers until she could support herself financially? And if that's what bella was saying why did it take her so many words and a round about path to make that happen?

So it seems like bella wants Edward but Edward doesn't want her...why is bella still in his fucking house? She should just move back to one of her parents house and let Edward be free, that's obviously what he wants...but bella just lingers in his fucking house, letting him pay the bills, buy her food, pay for her gas, etc etc. Its just beyond fucking pathetic.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/2
Sounds like Bella is in a hell of her own making. She should just go get a job and get the fuck away from assward. Bella isn't very smart in this story.
rtpkjs chapter 46 . 3/28
I started reading this story when it was still a WIP, I remember that last update and how happy and nervous I was when I saw the notification on my inbox... Oh boy little did I knew it would be the last time...

Now it's been literally FIVE YEARS and my dumbass still hoping for a update or at least a A/N because I think about this fic almost every week and need closure lol
Kat chapter 1 . 3/25
Years ago I was fully immersed in the world of twilight fan fiction but every time I came across this it was too dark, I was young and naive and just couldn't relate. I've recently started reading some old favourites and when yours came up I decided to try again. I don't think I've ever had a fic hit me on such a deep personal level as this. I was reading at 2 am with tears streaming down my face because your words forced me to admit some serious truths to myself. Your writing is beautiful, your words have true depth and feeling and I hope that wherever you are now you are still writing because you have a gift. Thank you.
Guest chapter 39 . 3/25
OMFG almost to the end of the story and FINALLY find out the reason for the story...RME!
Odainath chapter 46 . 3/23
It would be incredible if you finished this. I've read it in one big hit and it's truly brilliant. Great writing, great characterisations, great everything!
bubbly butt chapter 1 . 3/14
This never gets old.. Even though it's not completed, it's a masterpiece to come back. *sigh*

Nobody does it like the you and a few other awho don't write fanfiction anymore. The stories are the same nowadays and the days of a compelling gripping and enthralling stories is gone.
Guest chapter 46 . 3/13
Does anyone know if this story is going to be completed? I really liked reading this and hope that one day it would be complete. Don’t like the mean Edward but hope that in time he learns to love his wife. Again I have enjoyed reading this story.
Guest chapter 46 . 3/6
Please finish this I’ve come back every month for years since you’ve stopped writing, I just want to know the end. It’s so beautiful
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