Reviews for Expectations and Other Moving Pieces
Guest chapter 46 . 10/22
Please come back :(
Kim chapter 46 . 6/17
Mmmm frustrating AF. Poor Edward. Toooo much unfinished drama.
Xxx chapter 7 . 6/14
Get a fuckin job you stupid bitch!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Do you plan to finish it ever? Its one of those stories that stuck with me for a long time.
lalaks chapter 46 . 5/20
Can someone write the last chapters as a new fanfic? I really want an ending.
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 1 . 3/28
WILL YOU EVER FINISH THE STORY
caressa28 chapter 8 . 3/17
Oh my god bella. Get a job.
mariadisales chapter 18 . 3/10
This story is really frustrating, I'm in chapter 18 and I don't know if this is going to get better. What a damn torment in which they live and you make me live. hahahaha I hope and get better soooooon
Anasamantha09 chapter 46 . 3/8
Do you know we are waiting? It is one of the most moving fanfic of this site.
kittycat0 chapter 1 . 3/2
Such a moving story. Wish it weren’t incomplete. Very angsty. Had me crying and conflicted. Please finish!
Arabella chapter 46 . 2/15
Hey,

I just...idk, it's been years since I read Twilight fan fic. I moved on to ouat and now Shadowhunters. But yeah, this is the one fic I've never forgotten. It was so well written and my god, was I obsessed with it. It's weird, coming back, and reading Edward and Bella...how I went from reading about them in different universes almost every minute of the day to just having these memories. I sometimes have to think...was that fanfic or canon. But I have always said that Twilight fanfic is probably the best written. Nothing was off bounds and the ideas were incredible. I know this wasn't finished and I wasn't here so idk the story or what happened. But I was just going through some SH fanfic and one of the titles is "expectations" and almost always, my head follows with "and other moving pieces" when I hear or say that word. The terse language and angst and build up was incredible and this story actually influenced me to try creative writing and in a funny way, I wouldn't be where I am today if I hadn't read this. So thankyou, wherever you are or whatever you are doing. I really hope you are a published author. Because I'm on my third fandom now and I've read so many fanfics since I read this. It's been so long and yet this fic is so special to me. This one fic which I probably stopped reading 8 years ago. This is the one I never forget and think about from time to time. I hope you are in a good place and doing well.
Guest chapter 46 . 2/8
Hi. I’m from Jamaica. Read this story several times even though it’s unfinished and I feel the emotions deeply every-time. You are a great writer and I hope you finish this beautiful story one day.
eveSwan chapter 1 . 2/5
Voy a ser una más, esperando que alguna vez actualizes está historia y ver su final. Después de tanto años seguimos esperando
laklak chapter 46 . 2/3
Pleaaase complete it! I'll pay you, you can use other platforms too. Also other reviewers - do you know of any movies/books along these lines that I can read? Where the guy puts the girl on a pedestal and everything breaks down?
MariaMcCrayA chapter 46 . 1/15
Please come back... this is story, is too perfect... to beautiful... to real to be left unfinished.
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