Reviews for Expectations and Other Moving Pieces
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 42 . 2/3/2022
There are four chapters left. If Bella doesn’t get her crap together I’m going to throw my phone. I need her to see Jacob and not want him. I need Edward to admit her loves her. I need Bella to love herself. And I need them to stay married.

Let’s see if I get ANY of what I need. So good so far.
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 37 . 2/3/2022
Thank God . I love them both like they’re my imperfect children I’m so happy
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 32 . 2/3/2022
I’m throwing a tantrum right now. I literally threw my phone down and walked away. Because EVERY single chapter I just Kept saying “get a divorce”. But NOW I dont Want them to. I want Them to work it out. And I know they will.

Yet, I’m really proud of Edward. I’m really proud of them both.
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 23 . 2/3/2022
At the halfway point and stuff is starting to tie together now. This makes more sense to his anger and her guilt.
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 18 . 2/2/2022
Okay so I was way off. He knew how she felt about him. I can see how he built resentment towards her. Maybe there’s more? I think They’re both wrong but I’m curious how Edward was playing victim. Hmmmm.
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 14 . 2/2/2022
Okay actually I’m guessing that she lied that she loved him? Kept seeing Jake on the side? Maybe to convince him to move to NY and he did because he loved her? He figured out she didn’t love him and he was crushed. That’s what I’m thinking!
MegaTwilightgirl123 chapter 13 . 2/2/2022
I ask Myself the same question at the end of every chapter. WHAT. DID. SHE. DO?!

Like, she had Jake as a boyfriend. Okay. I remember from a previous chapter that jake was at the wedding. What was said beforehand?! To make Edward so sad… and she didn’t know why he was sad.. I’m so confused in the best way. I’m rooting for you.

I’m terrified of what Bella has done to turn Edward into this person around her. I also Like how she’s THAT GIRL and for once Edward isn’t THAT GUY. Or maybe just not to her? Idk.

It has to do with Jacob I’m sure. But what?! They were already together. Did she cheat when they were married? Wah!
shoogah.b chapter 46 . 1/22/2022
This is such a beautiful story.
Monnie Mcintosh chapter 46 . 11/30/2021
This was such a beautiful but heartbreaking story, I’m just not sure if it way it was amazing
Guest chapter 38 . 11/10/2021
very bad
Guest chapter 46 . 10/22/2021
Please come back :(
Kim chapter 46 . 6/17/2021
Mmmm frustrating AF. Poor Edward. Toooo much unfinished drama.
Xxx chapter 7 . 6/14/2021
Get a fuckin job you stupid bitch!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2021
Do you plan to finish it ever? Its one of those stories that stuck with me for a long time.
lalaks chapter 46 . 5/20/2021
Can someone write the last chapters as a new fanfic? I really want an ending.
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