Reviews for She Wants To Make Us Happy? OC
theboyandgirlwhowaited chapter 21 . 7/8/2010
Wowwwww.

I almost like the other one better, actually.

But the end was funny.

Weird, but funny. Sorta.

But all I have to say about everything else is wooooowww.

:)

~.Becca.~
feministgrimm chapter 21 . 7/8/2010
erm... random or what?
KENDRA1212 chapter 21 . 7/7/2010
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OOOOOOOOKKKKKKKAAAAAYYYY

im trying to deside which ending i like better...

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uhhh im gonna leave now...

'gets up and leaves coffie shop. throwing confused and unsure glance over shoulder...'

sorry i just imagined myself in a coffie shop... well...

Bye!

~KENDRA1212
Blonde to the brain chapter 21 . 7/7/2010
That was a intresting ending... you know, I don't think i would have ever thought of onion rings. :)
MissBananaFortune chapter 20 . 6/29/2010
heheheheh I LOVED THIS STORY. it made be laugh so hard i think i nearly woke up my mum and thats a problem cos im not allowed the the computer in the middle of the night. anyways, that was beside the point, the point being that your story was awesomely histerical in an randomly awesome and histerical way. CHINGG! lol I have another word puck does not and will not ever know-combobulation! its one of my like favourite words :) it means to be in a state of confusion or be confused :) adios! bye-byeee :D
SilverMoonLightWings chapter 20 . 6/27/2010
ending made me sad :(
GirlUdon'tMessWith chapter 20 . 6/25/2010
Why did you kill them all?
Kimi-chan is a cat witch chapter 10 . 6/25/2010
you know what's a coincidence? my name is Carson. and No BODY ever uses a name like Carson. im impressed. thanks :)
Kimi-chan is a cat witch chapter 5 . 6/25/2010
wait im confused. is Puck falling for Harper?
KENDRA1212 chapter 20 . 6/24/2010
whoa, huh? wait... so you killed everyone?... no offence but that was well, how sould i put this... i didnt like it ok? but hey it was good untill the end...

Sorry!

~KENDRA1212
Lara D chapter 20 . 6/24/2010
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...WHAT THE MUFFINS! Ok, me. Not happy. Serious. See? No Emotions showing! Really, that was it? Umm...pretty not great. No offence. But really...

WHAT! You just killed them! And if that is the last chapter...

I will never be able to show my face in public again! D Oh look! A smiley face! My emotions are telling me that it thinks this is offensive, but my gut tells me it's hilaious. Who to believe...

I dunno. This was kind of a downer, but I still thought it was pretty funny. But this wouldn't really he something to talk about... Sorry about that. I still like this story (even if it is psychopathic).

I just think it needed a LITTLE more something...

Umm...what did I just write? Oh well, I think the aliens are trying to take over me and my muffin army.

YOU WILL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE!

Still, kind of good ending!

Lara
theboyandgirlwhowaited chapter 19 . 6/22/2010
I love this story! Update soon! Pleaseeeee! 3

~.Becca.~
SilverMoonLightWings chapter 19 . 6/17/2010
I think you posted the same chap. twice...

Update soon!
Lara D chapter 19 . 6/17/2010
Who does this seem so familiar? Hmmm...I think you posted this already. Oh well, my brain is refreshed anyway! D Update!

~Lara
GirlUdon'tMessWith chapter 19 . 6/17/2010
You put the same chapter twice.
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