Reviews for Goodbye
bloodamber chapter 45 . 2/9/2016
Great story! It was a pleasure to read and I'm so glad that you managed to finish it because I don't think I could have handled it being incomplete. It was so heartbreakingly brutal and I really feel for everything Luke was put through but I liked the way you developed the story and kept the characters believable. I also had a feeling that Vader might have found it harder to turn his back against his master and that Luke wouldn't have an easy time in defeating Palpatine. I also really liked how you developed Mara's character so that when she deflected it was't such a surprise. You wrote her really well and she is probably my favourite version I have read so far on this site :)

DawnDayrider chapter 45 . 11/5/2015
I cried at the end. So sad but so beautiful.
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 45 . 2/23/2015
Nice story.
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 33 . 2/22/2015
Make Luke get captured again!
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 27 . 2/22/2015
Nice Han/Leia relationship.
Malyx Blackfyre chapter 17 . 2/22/2015
I love torture.
Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 45 . 6/17/2014
I enjoyed this story, and I like the way Luke and Mara's relationship wasn't rushed. Poor Leia with the baby... *snif* this a well-done story. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us. I look forward to seeing "Sunsets and Roses" completed... I am dying to know how it ends!
Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 18 . 6/16/2014
Nice father/son moment, poor Luke!
Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 11 . 6/15/2014
LOL, nice proposal, very Han-esc...
Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 3 . 6/15/2014
Awe! So sad! *Snif*
SoulSpeak chapter 45 . 5/9/2014
What a wonderful way to end this story! And how sweet too.
SoulSpeak chapter 21 . 5/9/2014
You're such a good writer. I'm so glad your writing Part 2. I'll be looking forward to reading it. :)
Jambee chapter 45 . 2/24/2014
This story was so good. Where to begin. I'm not a Mara Jade fan usually, but I liked how you portrayed her in this story. At first it bothered me that Vader didn't show more compassion, but that obviously changed near the end. I thought you did a great job with the emperor and his interactions with Luke. Thanks so much for writing this! 98,930
Jambee chapter 18 . 2/23/2014
Great scene here of Vader picking up Luke after being tortured. And when Mara Jade asks him why he replies: Because, he is my son.
Treenahasthaal chapter 45 . 7/15/2013
I have no idea if you are still around to read this - but I just wanted to say "Bravo." A fabulous story and one that I will no doubt return to for another read.
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