|Reviews for Lacrimosa|
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 16 . 7/24/2013
Nice build up.
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 12 . 7/24/2013
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 10 . 7/24/2013
Getting brutal and more interesting.
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
Very good. I'm liking where this is going. No cliche romance or whining heroines, just straight horror and medieval politics.
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 3 . 7/24/2013
I hope you don't turn her into a mary sue who falls in love with Kain. He's not the loving sort or one to allow any influence over him. Maybe some bed service, but not an emotional connection.
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
It's interesting that you used an older woman, instead of one in her thirties or twenties.
| TheLaughingMan1 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I'm tired, but this story requires reviewing, so I'll keep them short as I read the next few chapters. Likely only a few words.
| Tonnerre chapter 29 . 2/20/2012
YES! A sequel is on the way. YES! (/pumps fists)
| PhoenixFlame6 chapter 4 . 1/30/2012
Just started reading! It's quite interesting so far. Normally I cringe a bit when the main character is a girl, because that seems to go hand in hand with Mary Suedom and other silliness.
I like Holly though! Her age gives her sharpness more validity.
I know you've completed the story by now, but the only thing I would say right now, perhaps if you do similar stories, is some of the dialogue comes across as a little more modern than the time period, like "teenager." I think it was first used in the 1800s. Of course, the fantasy setting gives you some leeway ;-)
Definitely going to keep reading this!
| Niana Kuonji chapter 29 . 1/27/2012
"Aw, it's the epilogue. Story's over already?" *reads* "Wait. What. I do not call this an ending, I call this being a tease. Evil author." *makes sure to put on author alert so that she can catch the continuation.*
| Clement Rage chapter 29 . 1/26/2012
VERY Interesting. I honestly wasn't expecting this to happen, and now I'm wondering where you are going with this. Ward Gates won't stop Kain, but without the Stone, he'll have a hard time fighting the Reaver. But, the Sarafan are now rallied against the Hylden, and without the Hylden, they lose access to the glyph magic, so the vampires have a chance even though there's not many left... Looks like a complicated three way war is about to happen.
Completely caught me by surprise. Great work.
| Tonnerre chapter 28 . 1/21/2012
O.o Whoa. I was NOT expecting that.
| Lazy Griz is Lazy chapter 28 . 1/20/2012
I. freaking. love. it. I'm interested to see where this goes next.
| CiyCat chapter 27 . 3/29/2011
So awesome give me more!
| Tonnerre chapter 27 . 3/23/2011
I got chills when I saw that you updated this. Lord almighty I should have actually played the game so i'd have a better knowledge of the Human Citadel, but even I can see that things are coming full circle.