|Reviews for Consequences|
| Taki chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
It's veeeeery rare to see a smut!fic with these two where Layton is the actually pervy one.
Very nice work. 3
| Giotto chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I looooved this SO much. Good Luke/Layton is scarce to be sure, and while on my difficult search this story was quite the gold nugget if I say so myself. I LOVED how you depicted Layton, I felt that the coy, sly manner in which he put the heat on Luke was very...him, even though Layton does not seem the type to ever seduce, you executed that amazingly.
Gah, I just love how you worded everything it was really quite lovely. -sigh- Now it's over and I'm terribly sad, if only there was more. -woe-
Ahaha, but anyways; GORGEOUS FANFICTION-! Lovelovelove-!
P.S. - Your pen-name is pure win.
| Mat chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
either I'm too tired to process the words I just read or this sucks. I'm going with too tired. Awesome story.
| porkehXx chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
very very very very hot!
liked it all the way -.-
but i just want to say that you should rate it M :)
| xMunchy chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
Gah! The Horror! You should SERIOUSLY rate this M, damnit! GAH!
| Superqueero chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
/squees so hard
I. I. Thank you. I've been looking and looking and there is NO GOOD LAYTONXLUKE OUT THERE. So thank you. You have made me very, very happy.
I do have one question though. Does Luke go back to his apprenticeship after this? It's sort of an unimportant detail, but I'm curious.
| MysticalmanAsh chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
I loved this so much! I was also thoroughly impressed. c:
| Eleanor D chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Bwah! That was *brilliant*! Loved the details, like "a copy of The Theory of Molecular Evolution, a half-edited master's thesis, and yesterday's paper," and that last paragraph was just beautiful. XD I am inspired to write my own Professor Layton/(Legal) Luke now. I can only hope it's this good. It was funny ("—ohsweetmercifulheavens—")! And you have a way with words. ;D
| Evilsingingllama chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Reading this fiction, looking for spelling mistakes. I found none. It was *ahem* nicely written!
Must... Reist... Yaoi... Fandom... NO!
LaytonXLuke, LaytonXLuke. A disgusting thing. It makes me shudder in disgust.
LaytonXLegal!Luke, on the other hand is pure beauty ;)
(Of course nothing beats good ol' LukeXFlora!)
| The Phantomess of the Opera chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
that was hot!