|Reviews for Eclipsed Heart|
| Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
| S1203 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
| lenniem chapter 6 . 1/14/2013
Loved this chapter. "For a human you have a pretty atrocious fight or flight reflex. I don't think 'welcome with open arms' is supposed to be an option when you're confronted with a deadly being."
You are so odd
The way she let him know... This chapter made me smile though I do feel a little sorry for Jacob
| lenniem chapter 3 . 1/14/2013
Liked EPOV. I know your story is long finished but I hope there is more from his perspective I am enjoying your story thank you.
| Nicola Charalambou chapter 27 . 10/8/2012
I really thoroughly enjoyed this story x
| Jptexas chapter 27 . 9/30/2012
| cg39 chapter 27 . 7/25/2012
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story. It is clear that you put a lot of time and thought into this fic and added many elements to make it your own. You definitely deserve way more reviews so I tried to write something for most every chapter. Certainly interested in checking out anything else you write as well as your recs. Thanks again!
| cg39 chapter 26 . 7/25/2012
Wonderful. Great end to a great story. Beautiful emails. Just enough fluff and relatively quickly resolved angst, with a side of lemonade. Great job
| cg39 chapter 25 . 7/23/2012
BPOV yay! One never knows what's going on in that girl's head without translation. Thanks for sharing! Her reactions make more sense now.
| cg39 chapter 24 . 7/23/2012
That was an unexpected awakening. But I do get tired of B waking up and everything goes perfectly. You bravely took a chance. Curious - what makes E think she will have enough control to check the msg and not break the phone, assuming she's carrying the phone in her nightgown? Willing to suspend a little disbelief.
| cg39 chapter 23 . 7/23/2012
OMG I wanted to shoot emo boy. Less emo talky, more helpful bitey lol! Anyway, glad we got to hear more of C's backstory. Figured it was something like that. Cool talent, too. James was such a bastard. Things are moving very quickly for our girl. Wonder what her talent will be. Vamp B always has at least one - it is known :)
| cg39 chapter 22 . 7/23/2012
Amazing chapter. So much happened I don't know where to begin. So glad Jasper got to be the one to take care of James. Looks like the wolves were just around for back up and didn't get to see much action. Poor Charlie. Deceived from the beginning. He mentioned something about "another way" in his thoughts earlier so I hope that means he'll try to go vegetarian. Oh Bella. Edward can't live without her so he's gonna have to let the change happen or give her more venom or whatever after he agonizes over it. Looks like she's done if they don't turn her or let her turn. Loved Edward's inner monologue throughout this chapter. Everything thought and said was so true to the character you've developed. And Carlisle's potty mouth thinking was perfect!
| cg39 chapter 21 . 7/22/2012
Bella is really pissing me off. I get that she had a major shock and grief can make you do crazy things, but she is just making no sense. Jake is such an enabler, but I really don't want him to die. You are not playing around with these act scenes.
| cg39 chapter 20 . 7/22/2012
Action time! So glad you rehashed that initial meeting at the door in EPOV. There would have been way too many questions if you hadn't. Poor Bella. Poor Alice. And Jasper has to be going nuts! Can't wait to hear more of the backstory on Charlie. Great chapter
| cg39 chapter 19 . 7/22/2012
Dun Dun DUN! Well that was a shocker. Although I briefly wondered why there was never mention of a gravesite or an urn, I was surprised by this twist. So glad the next chapters are written or I'd be losing my mind.