|Reviews for Without You|
| Jeri252 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
| suspect tomatoes chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
HES MARRIED TO ME
SFMKFMSLFMSL GODDAMN I'VE MISSED YOUR STORIES
AND THE WAY YOU WRITE EDGE
| Queen Islanzadi chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
OMG you're back :D
Argh another amazing fic from you! I'm jealous, I wish I could write that well...
Haha good to know that I wasn't the only person who thought Grease when they saw the Hart Dynasty.
| Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I missed your stories!
I love the Hart Dynasty, but TJ is...uh...fucking ugly.
Natalya and Edge would be so perfect together.
I loved this! You haven't lost your touch. In fact, I think you got better.
| TJ Sparkles chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I love Edge/Nattie! Probably one of my favorite pairings. You just don't see it a lot, though.
This was great! I like that you wrote it in Nattie's POV. And the whole secret infatuation thing with Edge. How awesome of a couple would they be?
Adding to faves, of course, because I loved it. So does this mean you're back?
Again, Becky, great job )
| Edward's Josie Black chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I love it.
The day-counting thing is so...I mean, I know it's not necessarily rare in literary works, but here it's such a Palahniuk thing, and you know I adore that man.
The flashbacks are fabulous.
Hahaha, I love the Grease metaphor. It's kinda true...
The ending is great. I think my favorite line in the whole thing is, "I turned my head, and there he was. Adam. Edge. Satan." Brilliant.
| DarkenMystery chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I loved how this was written. It was awesome.