Reviews for Without You
Jeri252 chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
love it
suspect tomatoes chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
HES MARRIED TO ME

SFMKFMSLFMSL GODDAMN I'VE MISSED YOUR STORIES

AND THE WAY YOU WRITE EDGE
Queen Islanzadi chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
OMG you're back :D

Argh another amazing fic from you! I'm jealous, I wish I could write that well...

Haha good to know that I wasn't the only person who thought Grease when they saw the Hart Dynasty.

-Queen Islanzadi
Sunny's Priceless Dream chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
BECKY!

I missed your stories!

I love the Hart Dynasty, but TJ is...uh...fucking ugly.

Natalya and Edge would be so perfect together.

I loved this! You haven't lost your touch. In fact, I think you got better.

Great job!
TJ Sparkles chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I love Edge/Nattie! Probably one of my favorite pairings. You just don't see it a lot, though.

This was great! I like that you wrote it in Nattie's POV. And the whole secret infatuation thing with Edge. How awesome of a couple would they be?

Adding to faves, of course, because I loved it. So does this mean you're back?

Again, Becky, great job )

Tina
Edward's Josie Black chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I love it.

The day-counting thing is so...I mean, I know it's not necessarily rare in literary works, but here it's such a Palahniuk thing, and you know I adore that man.

The flashbacks are fabulous.

Hahaha, I love the Grease metaphor. It's kinda true...

The ending is great. I think my favorite line in the whole thing is, "I turned my head, and there he was. Adam. Edge. Satan." Brilliant.

xoxoLeesie
DarkenMystery chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I loved how this was written. It was awesome.