|Reviews for The World Will Always Break Your Heart|
| WhispersInTheShawdows chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
This is fantastic!
| Artistically Creative chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
WOAH! That fic is intense! I love the last line.
"People do come into your life like lightning, but every once in a while, there's someone who catches and spreads like a forest fire."
Its intense and I love the wording of it! )
| Scar-Faced Hundred chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
This story is really beautiful, in Azula's sad and twisted kind of way. Keep up the fantastic writing! :)
| lollipop-mania chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
excellent. ah, Azula
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
"People do come into your life like lightning, but every once in a while, there's someone who catches and spreads like a forest fire." I love this similie, do you mind if I use it? I'm not sure where it'll come into play, but it's beautiful and accurate.
Thank you for writing this.
| Twilight Phantom Dragon chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Absolutely fantastic. This is beautifully written, your portrayal of Azula is spot-on, and everything is purely amazing.
| Another Face chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Wow. Perfect Azula. Congrats. This is amazing.
| Sun Daughter chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
Wow. That just rendered me speechless.
Grammar/Spelling: A. There wasy this one place... ah, here it is. Capititalize 'you're' in:
"No," replies Zuko solemny, "you're not."
Creativity: A, I've never seen anything like this before.
IC vs OOC: IC the whole way. I love how you portrayed Azula. She is most crafty, and I can actually see her thinking this.
Overall Awesomeness: AWESOME! I loved it, even though I'm not a big fan of present tense. Added to my community, congratulations.
Keep writing and have a nice day.
| soulsforsnacks chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Excellent. Well written and you captured Azula's character exceptionally, in my opinion. Well Done!
| ukirina chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
The quintessence of a Powerful Oneshot. Loved it.
| x-Ink-is-Beauty-x chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
love it! You captured Azula's personality perfectly, I can't wait to read more of your stories :)
| eleventy7 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Well written and it's an interesting delight to read work which waxes so lyrically. There were a few sentences that become over-wordy or stumbled a little and interrupted the flow, but overall it's a pleasure to read and there were plenty of little gems to be found. I particularly liked: "Azula likes hearts and how easily they can be broken" and "The Agni Kai is a dance of evasion and offense, feet sidestepping, arms punching forward, painted in smoke and coloured heat." The former is a very beautiful allusion to Azula's ability to break hearts both physically (with lightning) and her ability to break hearts symbolically, with words alone. You did a fantastic job condensing these ideas into one simple and elegant sentence. The latter example is a great display of your ability to twist words and summon vivid images with them.
The introduction is strong, it begins to weaken a little in the middle (for some reason the writing felt a little jarred during Azula's defeat and the childhood memory seemed a little contrived) but you picked up again at the end; it finishes on a wonderfully strong and poetic note. The title is also an attention-grabber - kudos for thinking that one up. And it's refreshing to see a well-written and succinct summary.
I'll stop rambling. For some reason I'm in the mood for writing epic reviews. Sorry bout that.
Thanks for sharing a beautiful fic
| rachellephant chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
That was very good. Satisfying to read. You have a wonderful voice and captured Azula perfectly.
| max ride0001 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
This story is utterly fantastic. It's well written, the thoughts are in character, and really makes you see the world from Azula's perspective. Good job!
| K-naille chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I like how you writed this scene from Azula's point of view. You're not the only one who did it, but you did it really well.