Reviews for One Less Secret
Viktorija chapter 3 . 12/5/2009
Great job!:)
Nr.Six chapter 3 . 11/8/2009
great dialogue in this chapter! Please update soon!
Nr.Six chapter 2 . 11/8/2009
What did Rader do? Great chapter!
Nr.Six chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
yaay finally a story with Jack in it, great to make Cal jealous!
willabee chapter 3 . 11/8/2009
really nice perspective. the voices sound very true to character. a neat idea; very creative. look forward to more of your writing.
a testament to improvement chapter 3 . 10/17/2009
Aw, that was so cute. Nicely done. :D Did you see the previews for Monday's episode? AH! I can't wait!


IndelibleInk14 chapter 3 . 10/16/2009
*inner callian shipper squeaLING HER HEAD OFF*
thisaccountisdeadnomorestories chapter 3 . 10/15/2009
Really good job ) Isn't the name Hastings in BONES? Haha
alainnrois chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
Aw, cute exchange at the end! Love it. Please do continue!
csiAngel chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
Aw, excellent. You're so good at filling in the gaps in the backstory, whilst keeping your characterisation spot on and making it believable and enjoyable. This was an excellent piece. Thank you.
3rdrocker chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
Another excellent story! Thanks for giving us a follow-up to "Control Factor." I think you're my new favorite writer here! :)
ceciilee chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
i'm so glad you're writing this! i think the whole rader coming and radling lightman was a good thing, everyone noticed he was jealoused!
Pol chapter 3 . 10/14/2009
Loved these first 3 chapters! Can't wait to see what happens next!