|Reviews for The Unsealed Vampire: The Other Path|
| Dragonal01 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I always thought you would end the original story darkly. I thought either
a.)Mizore would kill herself
b.)Mizore would kill Moka and then Tsukune would kill himself.
| Zehel2010 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
*shiver* Dont scare me like that! I already thought they all will die.
)) Nice one!
| Alhazad2003 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Wow, I am so glad you scrapped that ending, it would've really sucked. Plus it made Moka look even more like a hypocrite; first she supposedly swallows her pride and then she dictates terms to the chairman again? Heh, with the setup you had before the ending, this would've been a debacle. In my book, it would've made her look even worse than Ria, who foolishly believes her actions have no consequences, even though she'll find out differently in time. In the original ending, Moka and Tsukune never do, which would've made them a complete Mary Sue and Gary Stu couple. At least in the true ending, we see just how much damage Moka's actions and inactions have wrought. Even though she never truly realized it herself, we did, and I thank you for that. Good luck on your other stories, and have a wonderful day.
| Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
No offense to the original story, but I prefer this ending.
| Grumpywinter chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
This was ok I like the original ending more. Anyway, I look forward to yoiu other stories, maybe in the future you can make a story with Naruto and One Piece, I would love to see that be done by you since it would be almost as good as your Naruto Roasrio vampire crossovers.
| chriscalvat chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I have read both version of your ending now and they are both very well written but I myself being a sucker for a happy ending prefer this version, but like I said both versions were just as good, I hope to read many more of your story's so please keep up the good work
| MistressWinowyll chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
The only thing missing is what happened to Mizore after the 'accident', other then that, great alternate ending. I really liked it.
| The Sinful chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Well that's certainly an interestin alternate endin. Kinda expected ye te do somethin like this. Ye always seems to either do a sequel or an alternate endin for the tragic stuff. Not sure which endin I like better though.
| A very odd fellow chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Personally, I'm glad you went with the other ending...mostly because I'm a huge fan of just desserts, M.A.D, or whatever you wish to call it. This was good nonetheless, as I always enjoy your writing. Looking forward to more from you soon.
| Ultra Sonic 007 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
A different ending, but nice.