Reviews for They Took His Life
crazyforpasta chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
that was soo deep, i was completely drawn into it!

wonderfully written btw:)

poor fang, i loved how she sort of died with him

whoo max ride...i should probably read it though.
DoYouLikeMyUsername chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Oh wow, I have chills.

That was fantastic!

I mean... it was terribly sad, but the writing was really good. Bravo.
ispksarcasm chapter 1 . 10/14/2009


bad prf. bad prf.

tho i absolutely loved the theres no plan line. its a fantastic way to close the story.

ur awesome.

and yes i ate your cookies... DEAL WITH IT.
L0n3lyS0u1 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Woah, really really good.

I cried, you have some pretty good writing.
tearsXsolitude chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
um...i like the story but not if Fang is going to stay dead. now like im not saying ur horrible change ur story cause this is ur imagination and ur story and id be an ass i respect what uv written but could u message me and just tell weather or not he's gonna stay dead? Sorry to be bothersome.