Reviews for Casual Disarray
NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
This was really good. I loved Mike and Jessica in this, especially the yelling scenes!
Blue Heart 98 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
please update! this is really good~
Torie Rilistkrytcat chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
hehehehe love it
JonAndCompanyOffToFightTheDead chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
A great story. Very well written.
moojuicey chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
Heheh, nice choice for a scene to write. I love a crazy Jessica and a clueless Mike. Thanks for writing!
bookish327 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
Fun insight into Mike. It seemed very in-character to me.
MadeOfStars chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
This is hilarious... I love the perfectly teenaged perspective. Either you are still in high school or you have a better memory for the verbal interactions than I do. Great job either way!
appura-chan chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
LOL so funny!
Kati-Mouse9595 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Haha! That's hilarious although I feel sad for Jessica kinda...I can't wait to see what happens next! er...I mean read! But still!